Thread: End And Beginning

Trapped in this sphere,
I ask,
'Are my surroundings real
Or unreal?
Where am I?
Or am I?'

Hidden,
I, the embryo,
Perceive but retain nothing.

Life awaits me.
A hallucination?
A deceit?
Alive only to be numb with pain?

Thoughts drift inside my brain.
I, conceived, conceive
A future.

Welcome, Woody, one hundred gold stars for originality. Very deep stuff and quite thought provoking. One nit, I think you mean trapped not tapped in S1. Not sure if you need those quotation marks, but punctuation is not my strength, so wait to see what others say. Not too fond of the caps every line, I found them distracting, otherwise, I truly enjoyed this.

Best,
Lisa

Thanks Lisa for your comments and for pointing out the typo error; must be the excitement of starting to write again! I have duly amended the mistake and will try to reign in my enthusiasm in future. Punctuation is not really my strong point either, another facet of my writing I really should work on.

Once again thanks for the encouragement,

Ralph.