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    Dianne

    though many birds take wing and fly
    fortunate raptors own the sky
    ravaging sharks, their lucky seas
    mighty gorillas rule the trees
    to flight and power I digress
    more important is loveliness
    a wild rose blooms beyond compare
    yet such a woman lingers there
    its tender beauty in her hair
    the rose so lucky, she, more fair

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    I love this little poem. A sweet tribute to Dianne. Especially...

    more important is loveliness
    a wild rose blooms beyond compare
    yet such a woman lingers there
    its tender beauty in her hair
    the rose so lucky, she, more fair

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    This is great! Nice work.
    Will you ever write a story for which no character will have cause to reproach you? (Stephen R. Donaldson: "The Creator" to Thomas Covenant)

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    Ahhh, lucky Dianne to inspire such a beautiful tribute. Very nice.

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