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    Ink Blot
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    paint your wagon

    Take this hell that you know too well and add a woman of virtue.
    With that, take your family and a sharpened knife.
    Breathe in, breathe out
    relax as you slice between them and you.
    Sit alone.
    Take time and know
    there will never be silence.

    Glue.
    Bosons or love
    they with you shall roar.


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    Good evening all! This poem is about the force that is relationship, and the relationships that "I" am.

    I hope that you enjoy it, any comments are appreciated!

    Chris
    Last edited by chrislewis; 10-05-2010 at 06:46 PM.

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    I had to look up the word boson, nevertheless, I enjoyed the poem very much. Loved

    take your family and a sharpened knife.
    Breathe in, breathe out
    relax as you slice between them and you.
    Sit alone.
    Take time and know
    there will never be silence.


    Excellent!

    apple

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