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Last edited by Willthriller; 01-23-2011 at 01:48 AM.
This poem really grew on me. The synesthesia (if that's the right word) worked great. I'm sure it must be an acquired taste (so to speak) but I consider it the natural resting state of the mind.
I think you're pretty brave to write about something as potentially meaningful as a thunderstorm. I usually try to limit myself to whimsy out of fear of being pretentious.
My favorite line is this one:
I'm obsessed with the concept of silence and non-being. I found I worked consciously with these concepts and only later realized the Chinese Taoists had understood this process for thousands of years.even the essence of silence glitters
like the harmonious plucks
of the golden harps played by the angels
Last edited by chicagnosticjew; 10-03-2010 at 07:00 AM.
Justified procrastination is the main thing busy people have that lazy people want.
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