Thread: An End to Summer - My First Sonnet

Originally Posted by JetfireK

At first I thought you were VeeBdosa as this is such a good piece of work but then I remembered his sonnets are on Lit.Org I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for posting

Ha ha well here I is,
like Buckwheat said when starring in Romeo and Juliet...LOL

I have to admit this is a perfect Shakesperean Sonnet, whew, not often I find one online this perfect. Great, great work.
Ron aka Vee Bdosa

If this is your first sonnet, I would love to read the next hundred and even beyond. Absolute perfect form; the only suggestion I might haVE, A very minor thing, is last 2 lines begin with SO. Minor minor stuff and I do it myself sometimes. I absolutely LOVE "So as from summer now we are estyranged...." Classic line.
Ron aka Vee Bdosa