Thread: Funeral of Heart

Funeral of Heart





I can feel I’m breaking

Inside I’m aching

Outside I’m beginning to numb

Please hold on tighter, my love



I’m letting you go for good

Sorry if things didn’t turn out the way it should

If you will be happier without me

Walk away I’m setting you free



I don’t know if I’ll ever be the same

Your lost cost me so much pain

Tears won’t stop from falling

Please catch me I’m falling



Each time I close my eyes

I see you, a lovely sight

I didn’t know where I went wrong

Please help me I’m not so strong



Today is the day I die

On my funeral, please wipe off the tears in my eyes

Take my heart out

Be careful, It has bruises and cuts

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There are a few awkward moments in here, but this is beautiful. It moved me.

Wow, I saw the title as I was scrolling down the main forum page and I decided to read it. This is very moving, and a bit chilling too.

Good work.

Thank you, guys. Wow, more reasons for me to keep writing and more reasons for me to bring out the inner emo in me:

I am Bum - an agonizing attempt of a hassling fiction-writer-wanna-be. <<< see my blog in progress.