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    Where Beowulf Lies.

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    It's been a few years since I've done any writing, or even come to visit on writingforums. Truth be told, my life fell apart. I'm putting the pieces back together slowly. Most recently I spent some time in an addictions treatment center. For those of us who have experienced addiction, it can be hard to come to terms with our "addict self" and the person we no longer are. I sometimes envision the two fighting a war within me. Yet, at the same time... the two are intrinsically intertwined. Two faces of the same coin. A great man told me that this is called "dancing with the dragon."



    This is a retelling of my favorite tale, the story of Beowulf, and his own dance with the dragon.


    Thanks for reading.



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    Where Beowulf Lies

    By J.T. Erikssen


    The Hero marches up the slope,
    To the mountain peak where his Dragon lies
    Armed with shield, sword and naught else but hope
    He surrenders to what may be his own demise

    The Hero charges through the gloom
    He unsheathes his blade and lifts his up his shield
    Too eager to wage war with doom
    That lays in wait to make this ground a battlefield

    The Dragon’s gaze meets his prey
    “Dare he challenge me?” the Dragon seethes
    His adversary not far away
    The Dragon roars, and then he breathes

    Heat and flame assault his foe
    But still the hero does not care
    The Dragon stole his peace long ago
    So his armor melts, and his mortality is laid bare

    And yet the Hero is unafraid
    “You shall die today,” the Hero declares
    The blood toll owed will not go unpaid,”
    And he swings his sword as his temper flares

    The hero’s blade plunges into the dragon deep
    And His thirst for vengeance at once is sated
    For out of his own wounds does his lifeblood creep
    His fate too belongs to the one he hated.

    The dragon grimaces and then he wails
    “What shall you be when I am gone?
    Are you ready to embrace what my death entails?”
    And with that, the Dragon passes on.

    The hero watches wearily as the dragon falls
    And ponders what the dragon has said
    And as he himself prepares for Valhalla’s Halls
    HE begins to mourn that the dragon is dead

    The hero looks at himself, then at his deed reconciled,
    And cries out in anguish to the Dragon’s remains.
    “I made you, Dragon; you were my child”
    And falls to the earth as his resolve wanes

    And in the dusk of his last day the hero does see
    The futility of a Dragon-less sky
    “What are heroics without villainy?”
    Beowulf laments, and chooses to die
    Last edited by The Alchemist; 05-19-2012 at 04:28 AM.

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    Welcome and accolades to you, Alchemist. No more dancing with the dragon. You must have much material to work with having suffered through addiction and then the “awakening”. I hope our verse, prose will inspire you to write again. I don’t want to miss out on what I’m sure will be works of depth. Laurie
    "Blessed are the cracked, for they shall let in the light" Groucho Marx
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    Thanks for the encouragment, SilverMoon. And yes, I have bit of material to "work with." XD

    My next piece will be up for Sunday.

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