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    Sinner MeeQ's Avatar
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    Not for teacher

    Now I was young and easy

    From under a Southern Cross.
    Gathering the teacher's gaze
    One that mimics your boss.

    I'm a mixture of gravity and waggery

    But she will tell me when to stop.
    One sage, two clowns
    but I am nothing to her but slop.



    (The first line is borrowed from an already published poem, I have used it with the concept of starting with someone's own idea and creating my own story from it)

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    start a thread in poetry challenge with the next one, see where other people take a first line.
    Too many 'but's in that last three lines
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
    http://www.lulu.com/browse/search.ph...d+forthe+train

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