Thread: Be With You

This is not bad,
But it cannot be good,
I don't know why,
But inside I should,

Why if I can't,
Be with you now,
At least some day,
I will find a way how,

Without you I feel,
A part of me gone,
But in some way I know,
There's no need to move on,

Endless sleeps,
With you away,
I know sometime soon,
You'll be here all day.

all smiles.. hard to read though. I always liek to find a way to relate it to my on life, thus judging if I like it. And There was no problem there.
To me poems are about interpretation, letting everyone find out their own scoop, without completely ignoring the prescribed number.
... More of a poems I read rule than anything

Thaanks soo much for that! Glad to hear someone likes and can relate to my poem! I'm not really a poet...but I thought I'd try it! I've written a few poems before but, I really liked this one thanks for the compliment