Thread: From innocene to corruption

From innocence to corruption
From swing sets and Barbies
To broken bottles and first cigarettes.
From broken families
To broken promises.
From teacher's pet
To high school drop outs.
From first kiss
To teenage mom.
From bruises on your leg from running to fast
To cuts on your wrist from being to damn sad.
From innocent whispering
To a life full of secrets and lies.
From can't wait till tomorrow
To things will never change.
From innocence
To corruption.

I liked this very much, un named. I think you did a wonderful job with the contrasts and most of the examples are very clever. There are a few nits. Not sure if we can alter titles ourselves now, if not, ask Gumby to fix the typo in innocence. You need to read through and get rid of those mid-sentence caps, they're extremely distracting in this particular piece. There should be a period after the first line, and drop outs should be singular to conform with everything else. To damn should be too damn. This paints a very disturbing yet all too honest picture. Well done, love.