Thread: Hurt Like Me

I am not a poet, just so you know. I was told that I should post this by my best friend, and so I'm doing it for his sake. I think this piece sucks, actually.
~**~

You don't glance over
You don't pass by
You don't seem to notice
If I start to cry.

Am I invisible?
Or are you just blind?
If I looked into your mind
I know what I'd find.

Not thoughts about me
Or memories, you see
I'm not that important
It's her that you need.

A girl that's so pretty
And happy and sweet
A girl who won't show that
It's you that she needs.

A girl who won't love you
The way that I do
A girl that won't always
Be feeling so blue

Don't mind me though, sweet heart
I know you don't care
All the tension that's there
Isn't too hard to bear.

I know that you'll notice me
Someday, I hope,
But for now I can deal and I'll
Learn how to cope.

What you think is correct.

ahah. What ? (Misterspider)

sad. inspired or fiction?

Sounds pretty damn inspired to me. I like it, too bad most women arn't like this.