Thread: The One

The girl the one i see i love and cherish,but the one that doesn't see me i am just there.
The one with so much to give to this world and everything in it,but the one that really means something doesn't see the things that you do to show your love.
The sadness comes and overshadows all that you do all you want is her to notice you just once.Because you know that when she does she will realize that you are what she is looking for you are the very thing she has always wanted. But life is not always this giving sometimes you have to go for what you want and other times you have to know when to just leave it for now and wait. Wait for that day were the joy of her noticing you is something uncomparible to anything that you have ever felt.
Don't give up on your dreams just know when to go and do it and when to just wait.

It could use a bit more organization. With an excess of pronouns, it's very cluttered. To me, the last line is cliche. I like: "But life is not always this giving." Specific imagery could work better throughout the poem.

Your poll doesn't have much grey.