Thread: The Bad Golfer

I went out of bounds off the tee
I threw my golf hat in a tree
After some drinks at the bar
I went out to my car
And broke every club on my knee.

Short, but you get the feeling of the emotion, which is good. I wonder if you might have had some commas after the end of each line as a break, since you do include a period at the end. But that's just me playing grammar police.