Thread: HELP!

I have a piece of a poem that I wrote. Its only two lines but I was hoping someone could tell me if they think its original.

My wrists are an easel, my blood is the paint
Im painting a picture to escape the pain.

any help would be great

Odd request but odd is good. There's not quite enough here to make a proper assesment as the way lines fit into a poem, the piece as a whole is what can be read. I can only see a fracture of what you are getting at if this is all you'll print so please, print the rest if it's written. This subject matter is not original, but then none really is it's just handled in an original way. Perhaps the rest of this piece is a melody of anguish and joy to match Byron or keats but I feel compelled to ask if there is another way to write about such tragic emotion. From my perspective more beautiful is always preferable to the more sanguine.