Your Ad Here
Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: two old friends

  1. #1
    Scribe Firebird's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    92

    two old friends

    winter and summer seldom meet
    but when they do
    they argue terribly.

    when I am with one
    I find myself being autumn
    and when with the other
    I am spring.

  2. #2
    Supervisor
    Gumby's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    I see you.
    Posts
    4,772
    Blog Entries
    6
    Very clever! I thoroughly enjoyed this one Firebird.

  3. #3
    Writer
    Join Date
    Aug 2010
    Posts
    26
    Ooh, I love the concept. It's a very nice bite-sized piece.

  4. #4
    Ink Blot
    Join Date
    Aug 2010
    Posts
    4
    Haha, this one really made me sit and think over it. This is the kind of short poetry that I like, Firebird, thank you.

  5. #5
    Prolific Writer Martin's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2004
    Location
    In the fire
    Posts
    394
    This year both winter and summer have had so much to say. As always I tend to agree mostly with summer ; )

    Simple and lots of depth, I really liked this piece, Firebird.

  6. #6
    Poetry Moderator Chester's Daughter's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    Queens, New York
    Posts
    2,089
    I adore that clever mind of yours, Firebird. You never fail to please, another outstanding effort thoroughly enjoyed.

  7. #7
    Scribe Firebird's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2006
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    92
    Many thanks for all your comments.

    Martin, I often find myself agreeing with summer too, yet try not to show it too much, as I instintively distrust those who are either too positive or too nagative about life. I've found they normally have there own agenda of some sort - this is not always the case though, of course.

    Thank you all once again.

    Love,

    Firebird

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •