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    Gumby, I think of Nero watching the flames from a blacony while singing a song about the destruction of Troy.

    We hear the tune you play
    familiar-
    an old song

    Great imagery!
    plucked with fingers
    manicured-
    no calluses..

    Just enough of a bite!
    Maybe that's why
    you can't hold
    a true note.
    Compact and thourougly enjoyed. Laurie
    Last edited by SilverMoon; 07-23-2010 at 12:12 AM.
    "Blessed are the cracked, for they shall let in the light" Groucho Marx
    http://www.punksoulpoet.com/2011/04/inspired-by-the-artist-andrea-wch/#top"Emalyne"
    http://www.motleypress.artandsole.org.uk/Issue1opt.PDF
    "No Forgiveness for the Chrysalis"


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    Thankyou Laurie, it's an old one that I dug up and blew the dust off of.

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    Glad you brought it back to life!
    "Blessed are the cracked, for they shall let in the light" Groucho Marx
    http://www.punksoulpoet.com/2011/04/inspired-by-the-artist-andrea-wch/#top"Emalyne"
    http://www.motleypress.artandsole.org.uk/Issue1opt.PDF
    "No Forgiveness for the Chrysalis"


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    I like this poem a lot. The end, that surprised me. and the middle which has great imagery.

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    It is such a pleasure to read this little gem again. The hint of things to come, possibly sooner than we anticipate, still makes my hackles rise. Good old Revelations. A delicious and well deserved jab at one who should be wearing a bullseye to make these things easier. I doubt I will ever cease to appreciate your boundless wit, Cindy, please keep it coming.

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