Thread: Impossible

Goodbye.
Goodbye….
Goodbye?
Goodbye!
GOODBYE!
GoodBYE!
Goodbye..………
Goodbye?

Hello.

This must be a conversation. But eh... What's all about.

Zoya, now if this isn't one poem up for interpretation! Let us in, dear lady. Laurie

I was just trying something new Laurie! Basically its a conversation with one's own self. It starts by saying a goodbye to someone/something and slowly the resolve strengthens. However after a while you become weaker again and reconsider your decision. In most addictions/obsessions, you end up going back to the person/habit....

Well, Zoya, thank you for the interpretation. I now see this as a very modern experimental poem. An interesting one, indeed. I enjoyed the re-read now that I know the history. Thank you, Laurie

I have to be honest. This is the sort of "poem" that makes me think someone is having a laugh at the expense of the reader.

Thanks Laurie..

Lady S, I promise you that wasnt the intention!