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Thread: Heatbreak is better than Heartbreak

  1. #1
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    Heatbreak is better than Heartbreak

    A hot summer day scorching
    an already tender body.
    Skin peeling,
    all sundried and wrinkled.

    That is why there is an advantage
    to riding a bike
    at such a young age.
    listening to the tar bubbles pop
    as you pass,
    like stone age bubblewrap.

    The tar seem to melt
    to the tires...
    better than it melting
    to your feet.

    That is why riding a bike
    is the safest way
    to avoid heart break,
    because tires can be replaced
    but your feet are with you forever.
    So no need to stain them
    especially at such a young age.

  2. #2
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    this takes me back to the days when i was little and used to ride my bike everywhere
    i still ride a bike to this day, and you're right, a bike will not bring you heartbreak
    but it sure can make your butt sore - hee hee, thanks for posting, StealSniper

    edit: and i thought perhaps this is meant to read seems?

    The tar seem to melt
    to the tires...
    better than it melting
    to your feet.
    just a thought
    Last edited by ash somers; 06-26-2010 at 03:36 AM.

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