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Gumby

You're getting me after a first read here sooooooo LOL

The only nit was this

my loves, if we'll hold fast."

" we'll " stopped me dead in my tracks. Suggestion ? Change it to " we all "

The whole time I was reading this I was thinking of " The Joshua Tree " ( one of my favorite paintings )

Much enjoyed this Darlin

Thanks Maggie, that's a great suggestion. I'll nip it if you don't mind.

This is a work in progress and I appreciate your comment/ suggestion.

Good Lord, Cindy, this is beautiful, and extremely clever to boot. I am too touched to even think of changing a single word, besides, I really don't think it needs any tinkering. Wonderful work, love.

This was really fun to read. There were some humorous lines along the way as I read the poem. I couldn't help but laugh at at what brought this dialogue:

'Hold fast my loves, this too will pass, if we all hold fast'

Well penned, Gumby.

Thanks Lisa, those are very sweet words. That you found it clever is just icing on the cake.

Foxryder, thank you for reading and commenting on this, I'm glad you enjoyed it.