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    Apprentice Featherpen's Avatar
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    Question The Sky Tower

    They are still building the tower…
    But now they are pulling stones
    From the bottom
    To place on top.
    They believe they can build to the sky
    But the sky is already all around them.
    Collapse
    Is
    The
    Only
    Option.

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    Prolific Writer MaggieG's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Featherpen View Post
    They are still building the tower…
    But now they are pulling stones
    From the bottom
    To place on top.
    They believe they can build to the sky
    But the sky is already all around them.
    Collapse
    Is
    The
    Only
    Option.
    I'm liking this a lot. It actually leaves its options open, and applies to so many scenarios. My only nit is that this being a strong enough piece to hold its own, the dropping of words at the end is not needed. For me, the device cheapens the strong thought behind it.

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