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    To Chaya....31 years and three children

    To Chaya
    Jealous moon
    Sneaking in my night window
    to touch the woman of your longing

    Caress her face with love
    The aging lines of her eyes
    Her mouth and lips
    The signs of passing years
    That you have been without

    Her highlights dance up
    To meet your touch
    As they once did
    Along the path you illuminated

    Reveling in her every step
    Her laugh and joy
    the brightness of her eyes
    Jealous of my kiss

    Feel her chest rise and fall
    As though each breath
    Was a dream, a hope, an aspiration
    And every release
    A resignation

    You linger
    over the memories of pain and sacrifice
    Entombed where our three babies grew
    Strong, healthy and full of life

    You have no arms to wrap around her
    No lips to kiss away her tears
    When in her sadness and betrayal
    that youth has failed her
    That her beauty is gone

    You have no words to whisper in her ear
    That her sacrifice of one
    Had born three living testaments
    Beautiful in their youth
    Of a passion freely and completely given
    in full measure, to a love that was true

    Oh jealous moon
    The faithful ardent suitor
    You have followed her many years
    But I have always offered you to her
    Merely for the asking

    Tim Johnides December 2009

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    Chaya is a lucky woman, Tim. You obviously adore her.

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    This is an absolutely lovely tribute, Chaya, is indeed, a lucky lady. This is a very moving piece with a fantastic finish. My only nit is the use of caps every line, they are distracting thereby disrupting the flow. I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Best,
    Lisa

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