Truth In Pain
Wake from the sleep you feign
Life cast away in disillusionment
Pain insane
Tells the truth from the merriment
Revelations that maim
Seperate the actual from the wishful
Pain that pains.
I'll admit it. I was watching House.
Anyway, I've never tried poetry before and I know what I wrote isn't exactly genius, but I desperately want to improve my poetry skills, or, as I'm just starting out, lack thereof. I don't know if this is an acceptable format for poems, or if there's such a thing as an acceptable format for poems. I would really love for someone to explain this to me - I've always been unclear




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