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Old 07-15-2008, 04:02 AM   #1
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MORNING

Rising late
rushes through morning chores:
mouldy strap


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Old 10-08-2008, 08:35 AM   #3
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I dont know if I can really help you. But it is a haiku imaging a moment's experience.
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Hmmmmmmm…
Seems a bit more
than a moments experience…
with morning chores and all..
What’s the mo(u)ldy strap about?
Have you been seatbelted in
some dank place for a while?

Thought haiku was 5-7-5...
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on that note I would also like to say good morning to you.
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