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    to cry
    for joy at this
    little life I watch grow
    he was not born my bro but he
    won't know
    Life is lighter when you shed your leaves,
    better when you nurture your branches,
    and more fulfilled when you strengthen your roots.

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    won't know
    the whole outcome
    until time ticks away
    experience being the best
    teacher

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    teacher
    you gave so much
    and let me know the stars
    I can touch,was there if I fell
    thank you
    Life is lighter when you shed your leaves,
    better when you nurture your branches,
    and more fulfilled when you strengthen your roots.

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    thank you
    for now eye see
    beyond limitations
    open eyes begets open mind
    soaring

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    thank you
    for being you
    and letting me do what it
    is that I do, even if I can
    teach you
    Life is lighter when you shed your leaves,
    better when you nurture your branches,
    and more fulfilled when you strengthen your roots.

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    teach you
    how to count lass
    a strict syllable count
    is what we try to adhere to
    playing

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    playing
    by the rules
    can be hard for me, I bet
    I have more than just three errors
    sorry
    Life is lighter when you shed your leaves,
    better when you nurture your branches,
    and more fulfilled when you strengthen your roots.

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    lol


    sorry
    for being such
    a stickler for the rules
    ingrained deeply from my childhood
    relived

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    relived
    it was nothing
    like it was once I knew
    the truth behind every lie (that*)
    you told


    *I put 'that' in brackets - some people pronounce 'every' in three syllables, others two.
    Last edited by CodeRed; 04-05-2008 at 06:49 AM.


    All my best thoughts were stolen by the ancients. Ralph Waldo Emerson


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    you told
    me how you feel
    an awkward moment, still
    reciprocation, eager to
    reply

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    reply
    quickly before
    I waste away the night
    staring at my e-mail clicking
    refresh

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    refresh
    my memory
    for I can no longer
    remember exactly what is
    the point


    All my best thoughts were stolen by the ancients. Ralph Waldo Emerson


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    the point
    to our liveswe
    may never know, perhaps
    for the better, for if we did...
    oh boy...
    Life is lighter when you shed your leaves,
    better when you nurture your branches,
    and more fulfilled when you strengthen your roots.

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    Oh boy
    this really sucks
    How did it come to this
    I though this was all just a game
    Zorell!
    If life didnt suck...We'd all fall off.

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    Zorell
    Is more unique
    than the name that was to
    me handed, my ideas will
    roam free
    Life is lighter when you shed your leaves,
    better when you nurture your branches,
    and more fulfilled when you strengthen your roots.

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