Thread: cinquain

crikey, has anybody ever told you

you have more front than myers > ?

Originally Posted by The Backward OX

That's plagiarism.
Judith wouldn't approve.

hmph

judith
would be flattered
if she knew i used her
werds so eloquently in a
cinquian

I s’pose we must make allowances for Victorians.

It has to be confusing, living there, with the Yarra and all. Too thick to swim in, too thin to plough.

Originally Posted by ash somers

somewhere
there is sunshine
and some where there is rain
some where there is morning town, miles
away

away
in a manger
no crib for his bed the
little lord jesus lay down his
sweet head


Go on chook lady.

Start one with sweet head.

nananananana

sweet head
between her breasts
gently caressing theeeee
hearing her sounds of pulse & blood
pumping

ha, stick that in your pipe and smoke it > !

Pumping
blood for the bank;
saving the victims you'll
run down next week. For now here's a
cookie.

cookie
said the monster
stuffing them into his
blue furry muppet mouth with fists
flailing

Flailing,
like a writer
who has quickly run out
of syllables! What should I do?!
Hang on...

hang on
it wont last long
life does have its valleys
but it also has its great peaks
just wait

Just wait,
Soon comes the mist.
First fire, screams, but then mist;
And in mist, we'll sleep and be safe,
My dear.


Eeuuuu, creepy.

my dear
don't be upset
please try to understand
why we cannot be together
not now

oops i skipped a line didnt i?


ill fix that, lol

not now
time is precious
come back again later
perhaps i wont be so busy
werking

working
with steady hand
creating something that
I can be proud of enough to
give you

give you
encouragement
firm wind beneath tired wings
carrying shared weight upon strong
shoulders

shoulders
sagging beneath
the weight of the world, but
if only you knew it was just
a chip

a chip
a dint, a crack
rendered of defection
hidden second, oddment, remnant
buried