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    {un}holy?! haiku challenge



    Here's a challenge for those of you with outstanding debts to society .. You know who you are; you wordsmiths of vicious repute. The thrust of this challenge is to create a series of haiku that are linked -- the last line of one is the first line of the next and so on ..

    quick example:

    Keeping faith is rough
    When the chips are down and I
    Stand, unrequited

    Stand, unrequited
    In pale beams of a guiltless
    Moon -- devoid of self

    cool? cool!

    So .. I leave the seed to you folk. Someone start it off. I love haiku, 'cuz that's what I started writing back in grade 7 when my creative mind leaped from my skull and planted a flag in the floor of my classroom.

    Props to Bartleby for giving me the idea
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    Just face the Sun when you prey.

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    Re: {un}holy?! haiku challenge

    Quote Originally Posted by Kurkurrage


    Props to Bartleby for giving me the idea
    I knew it had somethign to do witht he infamous. If I had any conept of writing Haiku myself I would start, just for the challenge, but unfortunately I don't. But it sounds like something all those poets should get a leg in on, and prove that you're multitalented.

    This sounds like fun...

    -Kitten-of-too-many-syllables
    Cadmus: Poor child, like a white swan warding its weak old father, why do you clasp those white arms about my neck?
    Euripides; 'The Bacchae'

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    All that's left is me,
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    btw im not much at haiku...just figured id try
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    corpses of my friends
    gravestones and alabaster tears
    frozen memories
    Nature weeps, the devil sings
    at mans greed and pride
    and what it brings

    Just lots of useless
    little things

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    Frozen memories
    I supplicate to the Ice
    To release my fear


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    Excellent! I like where this is going .. I'm always a sucker for modern haiku. Keep it rollin' guys and dolls!
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    Just face the Sun when you prey.

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    To release my fear
    Silent screams, alone, naked
    I submerge myself
    Nature weeps, the devil sings
    at mans greed and pride
    and what it brings

    Just lots of useless
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    I submerge myself.
    Into forgotten grey crypts.
    Seeking subsistance.
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    blind for an instant
    light shatters the dark confines
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    saviour(CDN) of my soul
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    Forgetting my place,
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