display your banner here

Results 1 to 6 of 6
Like Tree4Likes
  • 1 Post By feralpen
  • 2 Post By Nacian
  • 1 Post By Zootalaws

Thread: landscape poetry

  1. #1
    Banned
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    London
    Posts
    2,080
    Blog Entries
    2

    Thumbs up landscape poetry

    I love nature and landscape so I thought we could nominate a word and so on and get some peotry to rhyme or describe it.
    those who can draw are very welcome to illustrate it too.
    the word is:
    DESERT


    Name:  dry_desert.jpg
Views: 156
Size:  8.5 KB


    Last edited by Nacian; 10-12-2011 at 08:52 AM.

  2. #2
    Prolific Writer feralpen's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2011
    Posts
    319
    doomed to dunes

    barren glare at mortal life
    gnashing teeth, nails bent against it
    her own crescent lay unfruited
    bitter, burnt, bereft of even self
    and so ...

    she ages in her face
    north is as west
    across her cleft breast
    dunes of unrest ...

    ... oasis? nay
    tis but pause
    pause then driven on
    sun on bent back
    sun on scale
    sun on shriveled bough
    smirking
    baring that mound that would perpetuate
    but for lack of a sire

    therein lies her bitter angst
    shunned, put away from abundance
    and so she strikes out
    stab bleached bones in vengeance
    unreconciled
    unconsoled
    Nacian likes this.
    I once read the back of a box of saltines. The grammar, spelling and punctuation were all perfect. The contents, however were a little bland for my taste. ~ feralpen


  3. #3
    Banned
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    London
    Posts
    2,080
    Blog Entries
    2
    sweet moving wind
    softly it flings
    hazels of sand
    flustered and warm
    brittle it looks
    wanten it feels
    as sheer as hase
    grander then strength
    desert is shun
    drizzled in sun
    evening is near
    rising in mere
    desert is lushed
    darkness is plunged
    chilling in trust
    mirage is melt
    in honey flakes
    sliding a slope
    a dune of hope
    Last edited by Nacian; 10-12-2011 at 01:48 PM.
    feralpen and funkwolf like this.

  4. #4
    Prolific Writer Zootalaws's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2011
    Location
    Brunei Darussalam
    Posts
    296
    Of The Desert

    The glare of the sun forcing me to turn my head.
    Not the soft, salty fluff of beaches, not the cool crash of waves, this.
    Our blue is the stuff of far-seeing eyes and a cradle for the killing sun.
    The gritty, burning sand working it's way into every fold of my skin.
    The slits for eyes, the deep, brown creases in the face of my companion.
    What stories of travels are buried in those flesh-valleys, so weather-worn?
    The constant yearning of my body for water. My head pounding with the surge of thick blood.
    My tongue feels like a damp envelope in my mouth, the glue swollen and gummy.
    How close to the edge we push in our quest to be somewhere, not-here.
    The white noise of the sand's susurration as it is torn from the tips of the dunes.
    To patter down on every surface, its unceasing movement is my constant challenge.
    The pad, pad, pad, pad of the camel swaying hypnotically along, following its ancient varying path.
    Learned from wadi to wadi at the urging of its caravan, that flotilla of life in the dead sea of sand.
    We men of tribes, our calling, our trial to overcome the elements.

    Of the desert.
    Nacian likes this.

  5. #5
    Banned
    Join Date
    Jul 2011
    Location
    London
    Posts
    2,080
    Blog Entries
    2
    The SEA



    Name:  sea.jpg
Views: 146
Size:  6.3 KB

  6. #6
    Apprentice
    Join Date
    Apr 2012
    Location
    Hornsea
    Posts
    17
    Cool waters lap against each other following the sands of time,
    like an forever consistent poem that always changes the rhyme.
    Sometimes the sea seems suspended like a clear mirror reflecting peace
    and sometimes the sea rages, undeniable in it's quest to never cease.

    People can gaze upon it and think they have found the reason for sorrow,
    others gaze and see themselves as a being at peace with tomorrow.
    Ice melts, sand drifts, fire burns and only the waters of the sea stay
    yet the tides come and go and seem to show time drifting away.

    One picture is not enough nor will any amount if pictures be enough
    as the sea is all of them and none of them, calm and smooth or angry and rough.
    It keeps the wheels of the world turning more than money or power ever could
    as it will always be their giving life and gaining the respect it always should.

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •