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    The contributions to this thread are not frequent, but I do like them very much sometimes, thank you for improving my day Caliope.
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    Thank you Olly, for the enlightening threads.

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    The Truth about A Book

    It's heavy and it's ready
    For those long standing words
    It mimicks every steady
    That takes a heavy mord

    If taken with its truth
    The meanings will knot ways
    To even slunt it forth
    Please do take it with flaws

    It never means its role
    It's there to wonder for
    The reasons may forlorn
    The feeling will soon shore

    To keep it simply flaired
    Do give it something glaired
    To tease it flaunted plays
    A book might slightly sway
    Last edited by Nacian; 08-07-2011 at 09:56 AM.

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    I liked the first two lines, Nacian. But what are "mord," "slunt," and "glaired" (if not nonce words)?
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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    Thank you Trides.
    Mord is a slight bite (does not hurt)
    Slunt is sharp but not dangerous
    Glaired something that is obvious.

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    And these are made-up words?
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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    Quote Originally Posted by Trides View Post
    And these are made-up words?
    Yes and no...I looked them up and they are there..
    I first wrote them then looked them up to check
    Mord derives from latin for example..

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