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    2/25/08 | Plants

    Terribly sorry for the delay.

    This challenge's theme is "Plants." Literally or metaphorically, that is for you to decide. I would ask that all entries be in by March 15th (thread will be closed on the 16th) so that we can begin judging.

    Also, anyone interested in judging can PM Hawke. It's an integral part of participating, so volunteer.

    You may begin.
    Last edited by Hawke; 03-13-2008 at 08:16 PM. Reason: Changed as per Shawn's directions.
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    My Botany Study Group at Denny's

    It consists of Ellie, David, and you.


    Ellie is our bromeliad,
    a dime a dozen
    growing everywhere,
    but a landscaping must.
    She photosynthesizes
    at two peak colors
    and therefore refrains
    from coffee refills.
    She grows from trees.
    She carpets forests
    with the phrase:
    Next sample question.
    Sample questions are
    fruits plucked from orchards
    only her monocot
    fingers can touch.


    David is a lichen,
    staying where ever convenient
    and college ain't so much
    a foundation but a place
    from the wind.
    He coaxes the lecture notes
    from our hands with his
    drinking-straight-from-the-
    coffee-pitcher stupidity.
    He lives in a tent on a
    buddy's roof most days
    because he can't pay rent.
    Ellie wants to cultivate him
    and the waitress watches
    him, lovingly.
    Too bad he's asexual,
    which keeps luring her over
    with a "Need anything else?"


    You are brown algae.
    A holdfast roots you
    to morality and tiny
    sacks of nitrogen float
    you up towards heaven.
    It's just like you to eat
    cantaloupe, poached eggs,
    and have a reproductive cycle
    invisible to the naked eye.
    Just like you to bend with
    the surf, to nod during
    lectures, to agree with
    the pullers of the tide.
    I can't help but fear you’ll be
    found some thick-faced
    morning, limp and formless,
    washed up on the beach.


    I can't help but wonder at how
    delicately you eat those eggs as
    David botches another question.


    Ellie touches David's hand
    with an: it's okay.
    It's okay.
    You'll get the next one.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

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    Spirogyra

    For a hundred million years or so I reigned supreme
    Top of the evolutionary tree,
    Multiplying, increasing me
    My twisted spiral of green
    Echoing the hidden helix
    Content and un-complex
    Sucking in sunlight
    Life was all right

    There I would have remained, but for a few Protozoa
    Older than thought, one individual,
    Half my reproduction was a-sexual
    My children change and flower,
    Each generation comes and passes
    Oaks, redwoods, plains of grasses,
    Behind them I remain
    Always the same

    Protozoa stayed the same and changed along with me
    A hundred million years more,
    My body is eaten by dinosaurs
    A waiting game we shall see
    Mammals are the latest thing,
    Or a final protozoan fling?
    I take the long view
    Despise the new

    One day dominant supremacy shall come around again
    The works of man’s hand
    Wipe the life from the land
    Poison oceans full of pain
    And in some shallow silver sea
    The last few cells of me
    Will split
    Restart it

    The blue green algae
    Spread across a stone
    With assured superiority
    Smiled lazily to itself
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    Falling Son.

    Orchard Tree.

    The arching rains of May
    hug slanting horizon
    above metropolis
    of humming birds and beetles,
    sputtering, churning fumes
    against backdrop of smoking chimneys -
    refuge for capitalist corporations,
    resisting volatile markets, veneering truth
    with deciduous obligations.

    Lies lie across the ground,
    absorbed by central orchard tree
    climbing against fluorescent neon backgrounds,
    branching out to touch, caress, bear fruit
    for swelling masses - feeding roots
    of society’s creed.

    Greed bleeds from corrupted mouths,
    takes food from starving hands
    and sucks, savouring last breaths
    of the working classes.
    Last edited by Patrick; 03-09-2008 at 08:04 PM. Reason: Change of poem as previous one was not as central to the theme.
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    Seed

    disconsolate days
    winter awaits
    solstice rays,
    seed’s hold
    breaks

    granite ground
    twine vine,
    moisture bound,
    burrows down
    through crevices
    devoured and
    spring

    found. draws
    dew’s remains,
    grips soil,
    slips rock,
    sustains...

    life

    shakes
    dormant death!
    escapes
    earthbound night

    lifts twisted,
    rips free!
    gives birth
    into virgin light

    stretches in silent
    infant scream
    stem and leaf
    extend and breathe
    and grow
    to go
    to seed
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    Untitled.


    Clasping hands the bramble titters,
    holding quiet captives – leaf litter;
    leprous arms, capricious teeth,
    claw the air, and trapped beneath
    a brown-breast sparrow
    has his cage amongst fallow;
    nipping at white cotton wisps,
    shiny pieces, sunny days.

    Xylem networks criss-cross crosses,
    making walls where water losses
    wash the greenfly soilwards.
    Fondling this matrix tightly,
    the strands and skirts of Lady Ivy.
    Turgid cells of morning green
    lie in wait where light has been,
    and lazy phloem hands and wings
    kiss, caress the aged skin
    so that his branches quake within.

    A varnished snail slows in passing,
    drawing border for brown-breast, asking
    “Are you peckish, dear?”
    Giggling on her way.

    Up above the pair are mating.
    Farther out, a field of dib-blades taking
    humble slithers of the sky, slaking
    their thirst and shaking excess
    down fine green spines.
    “Just a drip
    Just a drop” the sparrow wines,
    hopping on the spot.

    Turning sun-breath into food
    the twisted captors breed and brood.
    Stolen when he dared intrude,
    Brown-breast, doing business quietly,
    has no natural propriety.

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    Poppy Fields

    Poppy Fields






    Boys kick up dust for lost fathers
    with scuffed shoes and laces loose;
    their mother’s tear on a cheek,
    flush with frowns, anger
    and a need to sign on the dots.

    Barrels seized in winter’s wind
    as pocket minefields bait the dead,
    lead them to crumbled stone,
    broken limbs and a powder
    that drowns in the snow.

    Polythene foreign invasion
    spreads toxicity and notes
    to line sorrow pockets;
    they keep the medic busy
    with spades and scales.

    Green beneath the crimson;
    where the fields that plough
    now foster kindred kin;
    a weep belongs with soil
    to push the roots of red.

    Tears that fall hard to plinth
    remember why they smile,
    as they weigh the cost
    in bags of white death,
    or a lapel, to remember.











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    Tragedy of Creation

    Tragedy of Creation

    Crunching leaves is all he hears
    As the forest floor surrounds him
    Like a mother to her child it blanketed
    Willows and branches seemed unreal
    The scorching waves the father gives
    And the humid loam holding him steady
    He remains unshaken and poised still
    These he least bothered and least feared

    As his roots impaled deeper into the clay
    So did his arms reaching farther than daybreak
    For this tree was different it seemed more clever
    And witty, and skillful, and carved better
    The blanket in which he was covered became more loose
    He wandered off and strayed far
    As far as the eye can see and more
    Oh what pleasure! he felt for himself
    Yet in his mothers' eyes are flustered and confused

    As leaves change color and as leaves fell
    The son returns with a smirk in his face
    Mother, look what I've done,it's a masterpiece
    Fumes and smogs the demon created
    His roots stitched to the cold pavement
    But inside the blanket torn about the ages
    A decaying carcass awaits,
    His mother rotting and lifeless

    What have I done! squealed the naive tree
    City progressed as the forest was left dying
    There is nothing you can do now answered his father
    For without your mother you are helpless
    Doomed forever, a slave to your own creation
    And in the end you will realize
    It's not your mother you have murdered but yourself
    A certain tragedy you delivered to your own kin

    And after all is said and done
    Crunching leaves is all that will be heard
    From the forest floors' beaten surrounding
    There will no longer be a mother or a child
    There will only be silence

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    Sorry for my lateness.

    "Crutch"


    Twisting vines a-creeping,
    into our life they're reaching;
    unwanted parasitic plants
    we love to host.

    Can't get enough,
    can't live without;
    life's too rough,
    without a doubt -

    let the chokeweed sprout.

    Toxic roots keep soil stable,
    and we are entirely unable
    to tear away the frame
    and remain standing

    to bear the pain.

    The thirsty stalk does prick
    but remains our cane;
    a walking stick,
    a chain.

    We give them rain and do not reign
    For the vines a-creeping have taken over.

    Last edited by Garden of Kadesh; 03-12-2008 at 01:29 AM.
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    aqua wheat

    aqua wheat

    algae
    earth salt and sea
    red tides whales ocean gales
    liquid landscapes coral reefs and
    seaweed
    Last edited by rcallaci; 03-23-2008 at 06:03 PM.
    Nature weeps, the devil sings
    at mans greed and pride
    and what it brings

    Just lots of useless
    little things

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