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    January Challenge - "Unknowns"

    The theme for the January challenge, suggested by j.w.olson, is "Unknowns"

    Remember that you may approach the subject in whatever way you wish, though of course site rules apply. If you are unsure of the challenge rules please read the 'stickies' at the top of the board, it is disheartening to disqualify people for things like a trivial edit, but the rules will be applied.

    Because of the holiday, you have a little longer to post entries. This challenge will close on the 1st February 2012.

    Please make sure that your work is properly formatted before pressing the submit button. Work edited after posting may be excluded from the challenge. Do not post comments in this thread. Any discussions should be posted in the Bards' Bistro.
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    Leaving

    From somewhere in other rooms comes to me
    the guilt of your whispering; it is the moth
    whose wingbeat is the click of the hand-set,

    whose fluttering is a stray scuff of steps,
    soft and away from me. Somewhere not far,
    our son keeps his silence, heaps the floors,

    clutters the corners with it, lets it gather
    like must, like webs, like years-old dust.
    There must be more than this, more than

    just flit and bicker and wings that are whispers
    dusted with the weight of their own quiet. What
    is to be the light of their worship? What word

    might be traced in the motes on the pane, left
    to hang in the tack of the webs? And what of these
    holes in the drape: ragged, festering, secret?
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    Algebra

    x

    unknown
    solve for me
    make me equal
    find me in myself
    add, subtract, multiply
    answer each digital quest
    discover now my true value
    magnitude, sign, precision digits
    we will then complete perfect unity
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    A blissful riddle

    In the beginning, everything is cloudy
    follow through and there I am
    at the end of every feeling.

    I turn anger into hurt,
    have lies transcend away;
    from etching illusion, I'll set you free.

    I'm the bonder of true friendships
    my best friend is love itself
    unconditionally
    without a doubt you know me;

    don't forget,
    don't let just passion fill your head -
    be whisked away
    and it will no longer be me
    there, in the flame.

    When you despair, search within
    I come and go and you'll never know
    I just might be in.

    Enlightening is my game.
    What is my name?

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    The Future? I Wrote a Sonnet On It.

    The future is a place where no one knows
    what happens next, we might look back to now,
    the end results of options that we chose;
    When faced with facts, they're hard to disavow.

    So what's the cause of these effects we feel?
    The answers and the questions go both ways.
    The here and now may not define what's real,
    yet still it moves along without delays.

    But one thing that I'm sure of: I don't know.
    And I'm content to simply let it be.
    To ride along and just enjoy the show
    just guarantees that someday I will see.

    There's something coming just around the bend;
    Will I recall the starting at the end?

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    Sacrifice on the Sands of Syria

    Girl runs. Headlights follow.
    Girl pleas. Breeze ignores, fumbles, punishes.
    Car pulls out. Girl tumbles…
    Girl’s suspended…
    like a flag not yet billowing
    not yet full and proud.
    She falls.
    She prays.
    She lands.
    Men get out. Men drag her back.
    “For King. For country. For God.”
    As her body descends to their greed,
    she meets the same fate
    as the other children long ago,
    barely a wind’s whistle of them left,
    sacrificed on these ancient sands
    for their god-king.

    We’ll pick up the headline.
    “Just a child. Such a shame, such a shame.”
    But live on we must,
    and forget that ink that defied her, named her:
    "Girl, unknown”.
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    Scrutiny Breeds Mutiny

    Today a stranger stared at me
    peering with ferocity
    on a quest
    for a lass she knew,
    her grumpy grimace
    reflected
    I simply wouldn't do.

    With her button nose
    crinkled up
    and pallid lips
    pursed in disgust,
    blinking emeralds
    deliberately blurred
    to contort my features,
    but still she eyed
    an unknown creature.
    So once more,
    I was spurned.

    Taken aback,
    and now staring back,
    I whispered "Screw you",
    spun on heel with zeal
    to give her a rear view,
    plum-faced and screaming,
    "You know what you can do!".

    Then I threw my shoe

    shattering the stranger
    whose bones still hang
    from my closet door.

    The gal that witch
    was looking for
    is gone
    forevermore.
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