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    Christmas/New Year Challenge - "Time"

    The theme for the Christmas/ New Year challenge, suggested by toddm, is "Time"

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    and the clock ticks on...

    Twelve tempting scenes
    of tourist traps
    tossed in the trash.
    Diagonal slashes did their duty
    marking moments marching by,
    leaving forlorn confetti
    in their wake.

    Snapshots of places I'll never visit
    (no funds nor time
    to seek the sublime)
    and angry red lines
    to remind me of minutes wasted.

    A quick click on rewind reveals:
    .
    The kids sprouting some
    from stuffing their faces
    with fuel pumped by hands
    that thrice daily set places.
    The attics of their minds
    relinquishing empty spaces
    to parcels packaged
    by my ever wagging tongue.

    A wounded soldier
    waging wellness wars,
    vanquishing invisible invaders
    to keep comrades erect.
    Scribbles in a notebook
    shared on a dare
    coaxing some smiles
    or a tear here and there.
    Slumped shoulders squaring
    to serve as lampposts
    for those drunk
    with despair.

    I dump grounds from morning coffee
    on what amounts to only paper,
    thinking of trees sacrificed
    just to be wasted...

    oh so very unlike
    those moments of mine.

    Humming, I hang
    the pizzeria's gift to the loyal -
    displaying yet another sight
    I'll never take in -
    and with a granite hand
    make the first scarlet slash
    as a few bits of welcome confetti
    fall at my feet.
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    She waits for no Man

    A fickle mistress,
    she brings no warmth
    to your bed-
    but clouds the minds
    and vision of all.

    You cannot woo her.
    She has no heart to feel
    nor hands to hold;
    though you
    are in her palm.

    Her lips are not pursed
    for kissing-
    they whistle down the hawk,
    to snatch away your moments,
    like vermin from the field.

    Though she will pass,
    unnoticed by many,
    all are left to wonder;

    where did she go?

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    I walk as I came

    I walk as I came;
    my shadow changing shades,
    shapes
    in differing lights
    along the same streets.

    The dance, predictable,
    like a pretty drug -
    didn't last long,
    unlike the real one
    ripped on.

    While no one knew me
    - a familiar alien -
    just I remembered faintly.

    And as I had broken
    nights before,
    this night
    I broke once more.

    So I walk as I came;
    my shadow changing shades,
    shapes
    in differing lights
    along the same streets.

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    Gates of Time


    Inside the gates of time
    there stood a lady
    spinning rhymes of gold;
    clutching, in her hand, a rood
    while reaching out
    for tales untold.

    Upon the twisted mound of fate
    the lady hummed a dark lament;
    she called an ill wind to abate,
    then sewed the seeds of merriment
    into the halo of the night.

    They rooted,
    springing from the earth,
    a symphony of joy and light,
    absurd and wondrous,
    sweet new birth.

    Shoots sprang up,
    then budded there;
    blooms of verse began to flower,
    to make a garland for her hair,
    the lady speaking words of power.

    A bard reached out
    to hail the muse
    in whispered praises of her worth,
    as from his pen
    her words were loosed
    in tales of tragedy
    and mirth.

    Inside the gates of time
    there stood a lady
    spinning rhymes of gold
    clutching, in her hand, a rood
    while reaching out
    for tales untold.
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    Stars fell
    into the palm of your hand,
    while you laughed and sipped red wine,
    as I struggled hard
    to understand answers -
    that I couldn’t find
    a question to satisfy.

    You languished, laughing
    into long nights - glass held loose
    in your fingers -
    I was scorched
    by the searing sight of a burning dream
    that lingers and can’t ever gratify.

    I longed to hear a tune,
    to make me dance - lift me
    to my feet to move
    and dash thoughts to the distance,
    where there was naught to prove,
    while stars fell from the sky.

    You touched my body –
    like some divine healer
    from my haunted reason,
    capturing my heart and maddened mind -
    to bring me into your own season;
    where springtime leaves don’t die,

    or ever pass through summer
    into autumn - never lie to crumble
    in a winter frost.
    spiorad saor in aisce

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    No Time for Cynics

    No Time for Cynics


    Should we, the unbelievers,
    tread upon the virgin snow
    of children’s Christmas joy?
    Who are we to dim the light
    that shines within the eyes
    of innocents?

    Are we so right who only
    stand and sneer at twinkling
    lights and Christmas carols
    sung in no key known to man;
    to puncture the balloon of love
    which fills a small girl’s heart
    when overwhelmed by bliss
    she squeals aloud at footsteps
    in that morning’s snow?

    Should we not, for pleasure’s sake,
    open up our weary souls and,
    encompassing the rapture felt
    by others, immerse ourselves
    in celebration nonetheless?
    And, by doing so, would we not
    enrich our lives as well as those
    of others as we pass?
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    A man in possession of a wooden spoon must be in want of a pot to stir.

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    And now I am past
    where streetlamps end,
    where soft amber blooms
    of curtained sills go fading,
    where the wheels raise road-
    dust ghosts from the gravel,
    and their moan and their rattle
    stalk the blackberry thorns,
    bleed silver in the ditch weeds,
    tangle in thistled, chalkwhite
    silences. It is here in the starfall,
    in the nightchant dark, I become
    again another self, and sing
    in the wisp and the flit it,
    in the slow drift and haunt of it,
    even after static makes the songs
    hiss and itch like crinoline
    close against hidden skin. I am
    A child again, and from the front,
    mother's voice ringing clear
    and charmed as fargone bells,
    father's tones running sound
    and deep as streams that wander
    lost in pitch-dark grottoes. Quiet,
    now, and I am small again in the fire-
    fly night: quiet and small in the wheel-
    sung rush of time gathering 'round
    me in the mothdust wind, quiet and small
    and folding like petal into sleep
    through all the small words,
    all their nothing-words,
    that will hang so dim, so distant,
    soon: as far and faint as constellations,
    posing:

    Is it ever enough?
    Is it ever enough just to remember?


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    Yesterday Today and Tomorrow

    Yesterday I loved you
    in the heart-sweltering heat
    of vehement passions
    and luscious flower-drifts
    engulfed by the sweeping stream!

    Today I love you
    more than the immensity of this planet
    soaring through the endless vacuum,
    fired on all sides by silent stars
    pulsing from their safe distances!

    Tomorrow I will love you
    when time whispers delicately
    through eggshells brittle underfoot,
    when the years loom large behind
    as a spector of what could have been!
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    Time to be happy, to play in the sun
    to laugh, to skip
    to run, to have fun

    Time for love, a kiss in the park
    to flirt, hold hands
    to dance after dark

    Time to have children, to raise them up
    to teach, to learn
    to fill each young cup

    Time to ponder, to think what might be
    to point the way
    to where we can't see

    Time to reflect, on years gone by
    on hopes and dreams
    to smile and to sigh
    a golden streak splitting the distant horizon,
    a magnificent explosion of dazzling light.
    Stunning! Defiant!
    ...daybreak, and life is simply awesome.

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    Man, Santa Claus Ain't No Blood

    Blue against the snow
    Could cause frostbite more quiclky
    Don't you want your gifts?

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    Skipping To The End

    Tickety Tockety
    Jason the Clockwatcher
    Has eight more hours until
    He can go play.


    Temporal oddities
    Unsynchronology
    Mentally done but just
    Starting the day.

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    The Time of New Year

    Tick-tock, tick-tock,
    I look at my clock.
    The time slips by,
    And I wonder why,
    Why I wait here.

    Houses are still glowing,
    TV screens still showing,
    Little ones awake,
    Eating treats and cake.

    Tick-tock, tick-tock,
    I take the clock.
    Snow slowly falls,
    Outside my halls,
    Before the New Year.

    I know what's in store,
    For it's happened before.
    And I hear them count down,
    As it reaches the ground,
    The great sparkling sphere.

    Tick-tock, tick-tock,
    I throw down my clock.
    We promise to change,
    It all stays the same,
    At the world I sneer.

    Their time ticks by,
    And so they do cry,
    But it is the change they fear.

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    Well Spent

    Each choice has a price--
    currencies of decision
    measure importance.
    How you choose to spend your time;
    a reflection of value.
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    The First Day of Light

    Gleaming so far away

    yet seemingly not at all...
    the date, December 24, the
    day when light began to shine.

    All the months, and all the days,
    pale away, just pale away...
    For misery has been here for
    a year, its dark ethers taking one and all.
    But something new has come on
    this new day.... a new word, a new meaning

    Hope

    seconds tick, and it grows
    ever brighter.
    And we wait, for we know now
    that dawn has come to a damned world.
    A line of a babe, the source of light,
    and crying coming far away...

    December 24, this was the day
    light returned.
    and for tomorrow we wait,
    for day has yet to break...

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