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Thread: November Prize Challenge - "Fire"

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    November Prize Challenge - "Fire"

    Every few months WF is giving an additional prize to the challenge winner. As well as the Laureate title and the free month FoWF subscription, The winner of this months challenge will receive a $25.00 Amazon voucher. Please read the challenge posting guidelines because it's never pleasant to have to disqualify entries.

    Martin, the winner of the last challenge, has suggested "Fire" as the prompt for this month. As usual, entrants are free to offer their own interpretation of the theme.

    Please post entries in this thread.

    No comments, please. If you have anything to say about the challenge then please use the Bards' Bistro.

    The closing date for this challenge will be 3rd December..

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    The Ephemeral Fours

    Ephemeral Fours



    water alludes
    fresh and subdued
    droplets of cute
    plural of pure
    rain and deluge
    hear them applaud!!
    life has awoke
    to browse over lakes
    the splendours of peaks
    naturally quaint
    blushes in crush
    to icelet of slush
    and pours out to sea

    earthen emerge
    tolkien and grace
    ragged in strength
    gravitas slides
    reckons to stay
    solemly clay,
    reddish in tone
    yellows of browns
    scatter the lands,
    havens and drape
    ringlets of greens,
    fields of the leaves
    the makeup of scenes

    heavenly murr
    sailor is air
    tingles the spheres
    dotted in points,
    evasive it weighs
    sweeps up the senses
    as high as the Everest,
    currents of scents
    ripple in waves,
    ribbons of breeze
    pungently float
    the witdth of the reasons
    the egde of the seasons
    above and beyond


    fire aloof
    heavens above!!
    volcanos errupted
    avid and hot
    lashes in cinder
    redder in kinder
    brasher then rough
    leader of summet
    forcefully crude,
    earthly assembled
    traverses the cult
    that fire's a first
    naturally nought!!
    musn't grumble,
    fierce as a burn
    lit under siege
    declension of cold
    reverses the told,
    cooling the cretes
    mountains and wheats
    pleeting beneath
    errutpives of heats
    dormant and slopped
    a clash of a flash.
    fadden, appeased.




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    Song of Snow Child

    I was born into snow
    coming from the cold womb of afterbirth
    smelling of some rotten venison
    killed in winter.

    Father’s hands
    red with blood and gripping tight
    my precious legs
    spanked to know
    if I had made it from my weak mother’s womb
    alive.

    And this cry,
    uttered from a thin baby’s frame,
    born to malnourishment,
    fighting to breathe,
    bore in me a fire
    centered in the calloused skin
    slapping my behind.

    When I was fourteen
    under the scrutinous eyes of father,
    far from snow and mountain around it,
    I was shoved by a boy of height
    greater than my own.

    I turned,
    bleary eyed, to father
    who had turned,
    clear eyed,
    away.

    Taking my fists
    I pounded the boy
    until he was like a tree,
    having been chopped
    burned
    and torn to its base,
    before the hands of father
    guided me from the punishing hands
    of school life.

    Again,
    at the age of twenty-two,
    father’s hands smoothed by cancer
    treatment,
    I felt the sting of an empty pocket,
    lacking a meaningful wallet,
    sentencing that life,
    which had always brought a fire to mine,
    slipping out solid windows
    into frosty cold winds.

    And oh, such a rage!
    Such a foolish, boyish rage.

    I did take my gun to the mountains,
    checking to see if it worked,
    as it had had to twenty two years ago,
    the night of my birth
    to keep my wicken mother
    from sacrificing my newborn life
    with her own.

    If only father were here to tell why,
    this gun,
    did rob my mother’s life.

    Orphan of the snow,
    I searched the woods for its namesake,
    cleared an area for building,
    stacked log on thick log,
    set to flame,
    sat naked
    as close to the liquid burning sensation,
    flowing like ocean waters over sores and open wounds,
    to see how close I could get before I felt
    a familiar
    fire
    burn.
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    Solstice.


    On a cold winter's night,
    there is nothing quite like warm firelight.


    A fiery log spitting embers,
    onto a sleeping dog smelling of singed fur.


    Sounds of carols played quietly,
    of wind blustering mightily.



    All in the arms of a lover,
    and hot chocolate.
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    Housefire

    Hear the whisper of the flowertongue,
    hear the hiss of the splitwood
    and the spit of the pine, hear the shouts

    of men and their quicksteps sudden
    from the far side of the break.
    Know the dark rain of cinders,

    know the bowing of the elms blackbrittling
    beneath it, know the float of the tablecloth,
    glow-rimmed and ghost, wisping

    across the char. But clearest
    of all, most certain of any: father's
    shade drifting slow above the ash,

    real as flicker, light as shadow: see
    his bones, how ember white, how sparks
    waver stars above his shoulder. O father,

    father, do not reach for me so; the weight
    of your hand is more than I may bear,
    and it burns, and it burns, and it burns!

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    Hearth-fire

    Among rolling hill-country by gentle shores,
    on a hushed winter-tide as twilight descends,
    new snowflakes quietly descended in downy array.
    Around the low clouds, a fragile moon-sliver smiled fair,
    with some glinting companion stars, down upon a manor-hall
    with door standing open to welcome expected guests,
    to draw them close to a fire in full bloom upon the hearth
    and to usher them into the sweet savour of a meal just ready.

    The guests were each bidden to a large table full of goodly fare,
    amid radiant faces, a company sweet with laughter and mirth.
    During the feasting, with clinking plates and glasses glinting in the candlelight,
    ladies in fair dresses and gentlemen in high collars and neck-ties
    engaged in delightful and witty conversations
    while bright-eyed and overdressed children
    giggled at the old domestic dog with kind eyes
    who had wandered away from his hearthstone bed,
    tempted out of warm weary slumber to the savory repast.

    The chamber was all ablaze with golden light,
    from hearth and sconce, candle and lamp,
    all flaming together to bless the home with an ambient warmth.
    The cheeks of those present were ruddy in the friendly glow,
    while eyes glinted brightly in the engagement of easy companionship
    and all complimented the host on the sumptuous and splendid dinner.
    .
    Near the close of the meal, someone brought out a fiddle-fair
    and lilting music filled the hall and lightened the hearts of all the revelers.
    An older gentleman deigned to lift his croaking voice to the familiar song
    and soon many were moved to sing along in sweet chorus
    and so they passed the evening in rousing merriment,
    in dancing round after the furniture was pushed aside,
    clapping to reels in a festive air,
    laughing free in friendly company,
    and long shadows leapt across the walls behind
    as dancers passed before the wildly blazing hearth.
    Courting youths with sideways glances
    caught furtive smiles and sparkling eyes,
    while bundled babes in maternal arms
    beamed and brightened at that late hour,
    hearkening amazed at the sparkling lights,
    from the hearth-fire and lamplights blazing, dancing
    in the midst of so many folk partaking in simple delight.

    As the night hours passed amid the augmented mirth,
    there came at whiles a discernible dwindling,
    as one by one a farewell glass was drunk,
    and parting embraces were exchanged at the door.
    The guests each departed with warmth of heart,
    as the horses made-ready drew up the carriages
    with shining lanterns upon each side.

    The last hand was waved from the threshold.
    The last light away down the road was gone,
    and then the family drew inside.
    The door was bolted against the burgeoning cold.
    Sleeping children were carried to bed.
    Lamps were turned down,
    candles were snuffed.
    A single candlelight was taken up the stairs,
    to the beckoning bed chamber.
    The last good-night,
    a kiss, then sleep -
    to meet with peaceful winter dreaming
    as the soft snowfall continued though the night.

    And fading red the embers glowed
    upon the hearth in manor-hall.
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    The Corner Store Was Her Arsenal

    Divorce by fire,
    screw the courts.
    She passes a Bic beneath
    her sentencing slip
    embossed with a magistrate's seal.
    Parole granted by sear.

    Flame licks yellowed parchment
    sickly as an alky's skin.
    Ebony snow falls
    onto a coral coverlet
    speckled by crusty carmine
    from a nose now listing to the left.

    An investment of a dollar
    for a pink plastic key
    to the prison;
    all locks tumbled
    with roll of a broken thumb.

    Half a bottle of Sominex
    snuck into the rum
    (put him under
    but not six feet)
    fell short but not as short
    as time (her flight leaves at four).

    The retirement of C.O. Unstable
    must proceed as planned.
    She caresses a seam
    of his boxers
    with the last corner
    of flaming past.
    Singed pads go unnoticed
    as flickering amber devours cotton
    and the scent of burning corruption
    tickles bloodcaked nares.

    Hypnotized by fiery dance,
    barking snaps her from her trance
    as the troupe takes over the bed.

    Suitcase in hand, new persona in pocket,
    she steps onto the stoop,
    lungs fully inflated with freedom.

    The comatose muscles of her cheeks
    creak in a comeback smile
    as she spins to see
    first wisps of flesh fueled smoke
    snake through a cracked sash.

    He always was an avid fan
    of a good barbecue,
    surely he's enjoying
    his just desserts.
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    perfect pulchritude
    flirts with ravages of time​
    crumbles to ashes
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    Matador

    White air, still and dry

    as delicate as a sliver,

    is inturrupted where the Matador floats.

    I feel the crackling in my throat.


    Inside the Arena,

    the barterer trades danger

    for red lipstick,glittering eyes,

    and the cacophony of roses.



    As my fingers worm to hook

    into a patch of earth,

    my will loses its defense.

    I struggle to remember the color green.

    Capote, red, blood red, snaps and swirls

    commanding the livid flame of Toro

    to thunder through the crimson caul.



    The Suit of Lights ignites.



    Matador, if you came to me as only a man,

    speaking to me only with your tongue,

    I could not see or hear you.

    I can only recognize your blaze, your declaration,

    in that Moment of Truth

    when you strike my match

    and burn the house down
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