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    Mentor Olly Buckle's Avatar
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    July challenge, "Your Muse"

    Gumby, our winner from the 'lessons' challenge has chosen the subject for this month as

    "Your Muse"

    Please post your entries below, check the 'stickies' at the top of the page if you are uncertain of the rules, but please remember no editing after you have posted.

    Today is the 8th July, you have two weeks, I shall close this thread on the 22nd, I look forward to reading your entries, good luck, Olly.
    Last edited by Olly Buckle; 07-08-2011 at 07:22 PM.
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    Your Seasons

    Looking at you, the joy in your eyes, your dimples
    ___when you smile
    _______remind me of summer.

    _When you cry, your tears like autumn
    ____drift me into darkness

    ______and winter
    _________where I wait for spring;

    ___wait for you to blossom
    again.

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    Why Not Write A Happy Poem?

    Writing dark

    a friend asked me
    why I don't write
    happier poems.

    Knee jerking over
    the question and caffeine,
    the best I could offer
    was a half-assed soliloquy
    I didn't find convincing.

    "I only write what comes...
    Otherwise it's crap."

    Leaving her to do the math,
    she, being a traitor, asked:

    "Why don't you write a poem for me?"

    A Trap! Adrenaline
    kicked my knee,
    voice betraying
    nervously:

    "It's not a faucet baby,
    sometime, eventually...
    I'd like to but there
    are no guarantees."

    Indeed,
    after the fact,
    unexpectedly

    Happiness was
    never a guarantee
    you could expect.

    I added:

    "Writing can be lark
    but my muse can't
    share the laugh."

    She laughed
    and threw a wrench
    into my craft.
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    My Muse


    During
    the afternoon storm

    when rain is bacon
    simmering and crackling on the stove,

    when clouds age old
    and mumble deep, snapping whispers

    from somewhere far away,

    when the sky is lit
    for a flash before it fades –

    a cold room, a place to sit,
    blankets to trap the heat and listen.
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    Poets are always taking the weather so personally. They're always sticking their emotions in things that have no emotions.

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    Melpomene


    She's slipped her chain, picked the lock
    crept past the guards again.
    There will be no sleep tonight-
    a mad man's muse is on the loose.

    She lurks in the corners, or sits by my bed
    rocking to and fro.
    Pillows can't smother the maniac's mutters,
    believe me, I would know.

    Pleading falls on deaf ears,
    she gives no peace or quarter
    and what's to be begged from such as she,
    when you're this asylum's porter?

    Tomorrow's light of day
    will see her chained once more.
    By duties, errands, bills to be paid-
    thank God for mind numbing chores.

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    Sojourn

    Sojourn, to shelter from the winds that rage;
    to rest and dream and feel a warm embrace
    while flames draw pictures like some eerie dancing mage
    within the hearth, and will not reveal his face.

    The thunder roars a violent overture and dies,
    to sound again as dark clouds hide the moon;
    the lightning fires the dark night’s foaming skies,
    to briefly drive the shadows from the room.

    I see my inspiration for one moment,
    and love fires glowing embers in her eyes.
    Travelers through the gale look for the storm’s relent
    as we watch the warfare raging in the skies.

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    Ars Poetica

    Poets practice rhymes on lined paper
    whisper words while in the shower
    scatter thoughts on post-its to dark corners
    where they lose themselves
    under unwashed clothes, behind half-read books,
    folded, crumpled, gone
    to the writer's chopping block.

    Poets gather, sometimes,
    clutching soul scribbles in nervous pause-
    -s while they wait
    through the reciting of others' tries at the mic.
    And while they wait
    they quietly rehearse the lines they finally finalized last night
    and then – oh wait,
    the applause! Should I go now? Is someone else going up now? No?
    I'm going to go up now? Yes!
    And I'll read my words as if the audience is listening to them,
    and if I get their attention enough, they might actually,
    before they clap, and I sit back down.

    Poets take their prided prize poems and package them
    into collections, submit them to contests,
    trying to make them make money, trying to make them rank high
    trying to make themselves make-believe that they might make sense for someone.

    Poets have made themselves the prophets of our time,
    false prophets, blowing beauty into words
    spinning fabulous tales, asking for belief.
    Dying on paper, trying too hard, lying to get attention,
    and begging others not to notice.
    Because what good is a poem that is not true?
    What good is a truth that is not beautiful?
    And what good is beauty if no one reads?

    Poets are the prophets of our time,
    false prophets, competing to see
    who can sound the most like they know
    something
    that no one else realized.

    Poets, you prophets, who sing to the muse
    of vanity and self-congratulation,
    presuming listener interest,
    your rehearsal time is over.

    Someone else must come now to the mic.
    "Never get so attached to a poem you forget truth that lacks lyricism." - Joanna Newsom
    "So let us not talk falsely now, the hour is getting late." - Bob Dylan

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    Angry Crimson's Calm

    I am the Crimson One
    I am the drawer of blood
    the bringer of death
    the killer of life
    the overpowering shadow to light
    I have the power to destroy nations
    To lay waste to millions
    To control many a people
    To make even the strongest and mightiest bow before me

    Though I conquer with hand and sword, you conquer me with your mind
    You are not my enemy, yet you subdue me and make me powerless before you
    Even from the faintest catch of my eye, you subject me to your understanding
    I bow before you and give me the words of wisdom, insight and intelligence

    I dare not lay my hands on you
    For the power you invoke within me is greater than my sword could muster
    I dare not resent you
    For the wisdom you invoke within me is greater than my boasting tongue
    I dare not forget you
    For the peace you invoke within me is the only I have known

    You will be my greatest ally, though we do not fight for the same
    You can control me, help me to stay my sword from blood
    You will always be with me, for you are the calm to my lust for destruction

    I break the peace, but you are my peacemaker
    I am The Crimson One

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    The Flow Magic


    It once was YOU
    And it once was ME
    Did I say rich
    Did you say right?
    As we both stood
    Wondering the skies
    A silence came
    Another went,
    We looked in wait
    We searched in rain.
    There was a voice
    That stood up right.
    Just as we turned,
    We saw it come
    We saw it stand.
    We clinched our hands
    We closed our eyes
    One minute pass or maybe two
    Just as we breathed
    Our silence met
    We felt it close
    We felt it near
    And thus we went
    In search and far
    Reaching the highs
    Further we climbed
    Those were the moves
    We both had made.



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    A Place of Dreams



    Brightly coloured rows,
    up to the tops of the hills;
    when I was child I could look up,
    to watch the plumes of smoke
    from the chimneys merge
    into dark clouds in the winter sky.
    When I was a child.

    Or I could gaze over the harbour wall
    at all the different hues, rocking
    in the waves of the marina;
    while the wind blew
    and the rain beat wet tattoos.
    I’d picture, in my mind’s eye,
    all the places where those boats had been.

    In times of doubt or grief,
    I’d stand there on the quay
    to feel the spray upon my face,
    while I looked for answers
    where the sea and sky were married.
    Whether zephyr or gale,
    the wind always brought them to me.

    No matter where I am,
    my thoughts can always take me back
    to my special place;
    my place of memories, of comfort
    and of dreams.


    spiorad saor in aisce

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    Deceased Muse


    A muse
    something of wonder
    a pheonix for thought
    creating stories in your mind


    A muse
    something different for me
    remembrance of time past
    saddening and painful


    A muse
    years of poetry written
    stories with emotion overflowing
    history brought to life


    A muse
    death of a parent
    abuse from another
    splatters of a heart broken


    A muse
    darkness over my head
    pages of prose
    strewn across the floor


    A muse
    one I will no longer allow
    infiltrating every thought
    time to let go


    A muse
    searching for a new reason
    to write words of happiness
    saying good bye
    to my deceased muse

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    My Mose ( Do you like what I am now, inside out?)

    Secrets flowing out
    Sins becoming known
    You've been authorized, murder me
    Will you take me now?

    Break my seams
    Look inside if you dare
    Figure the works, hold me down
    Do you like what you found?

    Love will you save me, or just betray me?
    Spilling out my stuffing out on the ground
    Does it make you feel better now that I’m bleeding in your hands?
    Will you take me as I am now?

    You know my secrets, moving in silence
    You seem like someone else, I don’t know

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    "That's all folks", enough of your looney tunes. No further entries to the challenge please, I am off to set up the poll.
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