Eleven excellent entries. Please leave your comments concerning them in the thread below and place three votes in the poll above for the three poems you like best.
In the Form, by Heavy Thorn
String Theory, by Gumby
Screetching and Stomping Lessons, by obi_have
On Learning how to Love, by Squalid Glass
Understanding the Waste Land, by Baron
Family Dinner, by Nick
Melissa, by ChestersDaughter
Rules of the Road, by Edgewise
Doctor, by The Fuhrer02
The Hard Way, by Jeep121262
A Lesson in Alliteration, by Olly Buckle
Eleven excellent entries. Please leave your comments concerning them in the thread below and place three votes in the poll above for the three poems you like best.
A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
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Fewer entries this time comparatively, I'm guilty too. Your lessons scared them away, Olly.![]()
“The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen
"Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke
Wow congrats everyone on all the brilliant entries - made voting really tough this month.
I ended up going with:
Gumby's String Theory - I love the flow and the message within, reminds me of my mum.
obi_have's Screetching and Stomping Lessons - this had me giggling all the way through. My man is a guitarist and I listen to him playing the most beautiful tunes, but I can only imagine what it once sounded like when he was starting out![]()
Fuhrer's Doctor - just too funny. It brought back memories of when I did actually attend my lectures. I never really made it through them, sleep and I were close friends during those times
Congrats again to everyone!
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