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    The early May challenge.

    It is only three-quarters of the way through April and TheFehurer02 is back to me with a new prompt for what should be the May challenge. Here is a subject that should be close to the heart of every member here, poet or not.

    Words

    Will be the subject of the next challenge, please post all entries in the thread below.


    Now I think I might have something to fit that, scurries off ....


    Thanks to the Ox, who has pointed out that I have not put a time limit on this challenge. The normal two week period would run out on the 3rd of May, however as we have caught up so much, and because someone may be working on something unaware, I shall let it run a couple of extra days and close on Friday the 6th.
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    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse.
    http://www.amazon.co.uk/A-Read-For-T...0461285&sr=1-1
    http://www.lulu.com/shop/oliver-buck...-18812406.html
    Read the reviews, its cheaper on Lulu, on the other hand you pay postage.

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    Words tumbling.

    Words tumbling, spilling, fast overflowing
    Describing the shining, the positive glowing.
    Dredging the misery, the depths of despair
    Laughing and howling, like you were there.

    Words uncontainable, have to come out
    Sometimes whispers, other times shout,
    Recounting feelings, and all the emotions,
    Wild, crazy ideas and impossible notions.

    Words stuck in the mind, the back of the brain
    Twisting, circling, spinning; again and again.
    Words to conceive, use, loose or save
    Words for an epitaph over the grave.
    Just the empty cadaver; the poet is heard,
    His soul stays behind, caught up in the words.
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse.
    http://www.amazon.co.uk/A-Read-For-T...0461285&sr=1-1
    http://www.lulu.com/shop/oliver-buck...-18812406.html
    Read the reviews, its cheaper on Lulu, on the other hand you pay postage.

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    There's Never a Dirty Diaper So Let the Birthing Begin


    I can never coax them forth,
    oh hell no.
    They develop in secrecy,
    softly whispering to each other
    while I remain oblivious.
    My offspring assemble
    in my right cerebral cortex,
    (some armed and dangerous)
    drooling with anticipation
    and desperately eager
    to be translated
    into binary code.
    Once the belly of my brain
    is overburdened,
    contractions begin.

    This Mom-to-be,
    unsuspecting I'm expecting,
    feels the tantalizing tickle
    that heralds their arrival.
    I rush to the marble hospital
    grabbing the birth canal
    graciously provided by Cross
    as undulations bring them
    to fingers stiff from disuse
    and they are born via gold nub.
    Little newborns
    dressed in lilac or blue
    lovingly placed
    side by side
    on a crisp white sheet.

    They remain in the nursery
    gathering strength to greet the world.
    Cribs are switched,
    and names are changed
    as they gurgle and coo,
    each elated at their emergence.
    Finally dressed in their Sunday best,
    I escort them to the keyboard
    for their debut.

    Swirling lilac and blue
    are left behind
    for the ebony attire required
    for such gala events.
    With a click,
    a birth announcement
    appears in bold
    and my infants take
    their proper places.
    With a deep exhalation
    and another click,
    the curtain goes up
    and you all get your first peek
    at my brand new babies.

    Hoping everyone abides
    the rule
    that even ugly infants
    are adorable,
    I pack up the hospital
    and store it in a drawer
    until another unknown pregnancy
    results in an urgent delivery
    and this Mama
    must make room for more.

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    Pig Sty Mind



    The scrape of nails on a chalkboard
    can be easier ignored,
    than the scritch, scratch, scree-
    the awful things I cannot see,
    which bump around inside my mind
    where all the junk is stored.


    God knows I try to keep it clean,
    but something always comes between
    my tidy, and my order.
    And things I wish I'd never seen
    become,
    a most unwelcome boarder.


    With my two hands I throw them out,
    place pretty knick knacks all about.
    I refresh the air with potpourri,
    then, off to make a cup of tea-
    when at the door I hear the sniffling
    and the snuffling of their snouts.

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    What Can I Say?

    What I say, can it
    be true?

    Or is it just a delusion,
    that is nothing but false?

    Can I be saying only my
    heart and soul and not of my flesh?

    is it possible to say with my will,
    and not of the cells' accord?

    I say, what do I say? Can I say
    what I want to say?

    I sigh at the thought, yet what
    can I say?!

    Oh Lord, may the words
    say what I want them to say!

    Only one saying, can I
    say of it now?

    I say this; "I go, I walk,
    and I let the light be my way,"

    for you are the one who
    will bring me words to say!

    so I walk and I will let say
    what I always wanted to say,"

    and I believe
    that is all there is to say...

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    WORDS

    I am an adult
    Nervous trembles consume me
    Like a child saying their first speech at school
    Into my personal shell I cower
    Safety from the slashing
    Years of belittlement
    Of being told my opinion is nothing
    Nothing more than that of a silly mind

    I left
    Learned to find my voice again
    I am an adult
    Finally my words resemble that
    I shielded myself from him
    I found strength in the tiny syllables
    A helping hand aided in the search for my missing chords
    They had returned

    A simple concept for so many
    ‘Stand up for oneself when being ill treated’
    It has taken years for me to return
    To a place where my words matter
    Where my words defend me
    Where my words make others reconsider
    Where my words make a difference to a situation
    My words.

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    Untitled

    The whole world
    Awash. Awake. Alight!
    The bits and the bytes
    All abuzz. All aflight.

    The words' constant zig
    Their electrical zag
    Coating the globe
    In a coruscant bag

    Borne in our minds
    But now free and unfettered
    The emails. The blogs. The tweets
    And the letters...

    A planet ensconced!
    From Twilight to Illiad
    Yet...how to sift
    The good from the bad?

    Words flit through the air
    I could snatch them anew!
    And offer them here
    For you. And for you.

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    Dirty Word

    All the words of love songs
    seem so cliché to a world where love
    has lost its tender grip - forever
    has no meaning
    when commitment doesn’t matter.

    Once upon a time
    romantic words would draw a sigh
    and not a groan; romance was real –
    not fantasy to read as an escape
    when yet another dream
    gets shattered.

    Once making love
    had meaning.
    Now it’s just a fickle,
    fleeting feeling and the poets lose
    their power as the passages they utter
    speak the thoughts that drag them down
    into the gutter.

    Aural anthems gratify
    those carnal cravings but can’t rise
    to kindle aspiration or to fire
    imagination to reach out
    for something higher.

    A child can only teach
    what he’s been taught –
    everything we value
    comes to naught when all
    that’s passed on
    is disposable attachment.

    No longer knowing what it means
    to make a real commitment, love
    becomes a dirty word - the very word
    that so needs to be heard.
    spiorad saor in aisce

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    How to express a word?

    In thoughts,
    To explore the mind,
    Ponder amazing things,
    But stay trapped.
    Never achieve anything.

    On paper,
    To hold secrets,
    Spin tales,
    But lay exposed.
    Mocked and ridiculed.

    Through speech,
    To tell a great many jokes,
    Share words of love,
    But also hear words of hate.
    Hide in quiet space.

    Or blank the mind,
    And let no words express at all,
    Calm and peaceful,
    But become nothing more than a shell.
    No expression at all.

    I wonder,
    Is it just me,
    Or do none of my options,
    End particularly well?
    My words see a negative world.
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    Obfuscations
    They're the agnate that no one talks about,
    Ignoble, abstruse and vilipended.
    Descry them in the Thesaurus, no doubt,
    Common useage was sadly suspended.

    Their usage now would be ludibrious
    To read them out loud would make you kench.
    They plead with the poets, "Manumit us!"
    "Save us from those who are quick to retrench!"

    We've become so yemeles with our wording,
    Perissology has become a taboo.
    I prefer the obscure words I'm blurting,
    Blow the dust off, appropriate a few.

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    "The word is God" he said to me, I did not listen.
    "The word is truth", they said to me, I listened but did not understand.
    "The word is Love" she said to me, I listened and understood but did not know.

    Words are a language, a place in space, a moment in time.
    They are a person, a pet, a thing and an experience.
    Words are a first kiss from a new love and the last kiss from an old one.
    They are a happy hello and a tragic goodbye.

    I sit here now and words fail me, my wife has passed, my children grown up.
    The words are in my head but there is nobody here to tell them to.

    I breathed out silently, realising I no longer mattered to the world.
    My words echo through my children, my words are my legacy,
    I no longer have any new words to say.

    "Words are life" I said to myself. Without them, we cease to exist.
    Last edited by alexward1981; 04-28-2011 at 03:50 PM.

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    The lectern trembles

    The lectern cups the paper;
    the paper cups the words.
    And somewhere between them both
    understanding changes.
    The scanning eye perceives the fact
    but misinterprets the meaning.

    The lectern trembles;
    the paper whispers.
    And somewhere the words go unheard.
    The reader, having started,
    admits not to the possibility
    that a page may have blown away.

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    War of the Words

    Alexander overpowered with cavalry,
    Aristotle stands fundamental philosophy.
    Attila's conquests established fame,
    Dionysius himself changes time.
    Napoleon reigned with force,
    Shakespeare moves with prose.
    Caesar lost him empire,
    yet on lives his writing.
    No sword, or bow, or gun,
    missile, nor any weapon,
    Has the immortal power
    to make men cower,
    when words they devour
    and by such are inspired.
    The battle is over,
    conquered is the world,
    for Writers have won
    the War of the Words.
    Last edited by Flapjack; 04-29-2011 at 04:49 PM.

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    The World of Words
    (A Tribute to Language)


    Since long have men boasted of deluding
    fated demise through the passage of time,
    Thus they nobly abide by eluding
    death through their words and powerful rhyme.


    Through this World of Words do men seek to shine
    by evading and trying Time to tame;
    Within this , eternal love they confine,
    Courting and trifling with immortal fame.


    The Lady of Shalott, Shakespeare's mistress,
    Ancient Mariner, a Lock of hair,
    The road not taken and Browning's Duchess,
    Nightingale, West Wind and Milton's despair:


    Only live till kingdom come, then unheard,
    But forever'n after – this World of Words.
    “The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen

    "Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke


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