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  • My Precious Land, by InsanityStrickenwriter

    1 5.88%
  • Nuremberg, by Nick

    4 23.53%
  • Shadow of St. Paul's, by Baron

    12 70.59%
  • Justice, by slugfly

    2 11.76%
  • A Voice in my Head, by Lady S.

    8 47.06%
  • USDA Aged, by Gumby

    5 29.41%
  • Coddling the Warden, by ChestersDaughter

    5 29.41%
  • Untitled, by Olly Buckle

    2 11.76%
  • Apathy, not ignorance, by brian_o

    0 0%
  • To find the girl, by sachael

    0 0%
  • From Sandman by Squalid Glass

    2 11.76%
  • Untitled, by bookbender

    1 5.88%
  • Guilty ... NO!, by Mao+Fanon=Free

    2 11.76%
  • Transcending Apathy, by Apple

    7 41.18%
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    Mentor Olly Buckle's Avatar
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    Poll for the "crime" challenge

    Choose the THREE poems you like best.

    Apologies, I omitted to check the multiple choice box before I submitted and had to re-do the whole thing as I couldn't work out how to do it retrospectively, there should now be no problem voting.

    Please leave your comments on the poems in this thread. Poems may be read here.
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    Shadow of St.Paul's had me close to tears. Man that's sad, but wonderfully written, I think. I really need to start reading me some poetry, I feel like I'm missing out here .

    They were all great though, I really enjoyed reading them. Was hard to choose my favourite three confidently.
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    My goodness, so much fun - and so many wonderful poems for me to see! This is really a great site

    I especially loved "Shadow of St Paul" and also "Coddling the Warden" because of the vivid imagery and detail of scene. But every one was Great. (and yes, gumby, I liked Yours - I am a Fancy Feast fan, lol; you are an expert at showing the significance of the otherwise mundane) (no, wait; that didn't come out right; ahem. What I Meant was...argh. There really Is no mundane in life, is there?) :/

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    I found something to vote for in each poem, but since I could only pick three, I chose Shadow of St. Paul's, A Voice in my Head, and Coddling the Warden.

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    Difficult choice but I settled on Nuremberg, Shadow of St. Paul, and A Voice in my Head.

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    Shadow of St. Paul was simply brilliant. Kudos to Baron for that wonderful piece.

    My other two choices were A Voice in my Head and Olly's untitled piece.
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    Sorry about the lack of title, I had intended something along the lines of "Points of view" to highlight the different voices, but forgot to add it before I posted. Glad you liked it Fuhrer, thank you.
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    ^ I have to admit, Olly, it was a short but sweet poem. I really liked the last few lines, as if something inside me got struck, if you catch my drift.
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    The subtlety and wordplay that Apple used in "Transcending Apathy" were so graceful. I think it really captured the essence of the subject's situation beautifully. It's hard not to use a heavy hand when writing about these things, but hers was light. So many beautiful lines.

    Also many beautiful lines in Chestersdaughter's poem "Coddling The Warden". It's hard to write a narrative poem without making it sound forced. The story was revealed naturally. The shape of each line was carefully "premeditated" (sorry, couldn't resist). Very clever use of the subject also. Very original!
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    I went for Shadow of St. Paul's, Untitled (Olly's) and Transcending Apathy. A good turn-out in all, with some fine pieces of poetry.

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    my very first entry really looked like a poem created by a 6 year old... i enjoyed reading all poems.. kudos to everyone..
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    So, the winners will be announce when, exactly?
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    Now ,now, you can't expect poets to be prompt.

    I shall get on to posting a winners thread straight away.
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