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    The crime challenge

    Our new laureate has come back promptly with a subject for your new poetry challenge, this is to write a poem on the subject of "Crime".

    Poems for the challenge should be posted in this thread in the next two weeks and should not be altered after they are posted.

    Posts in this thread should only be poems, comments either in the Bard's Bistro, or in the voting thread after entries have closed please.

    Closing date for submissions - 14th February.

    Congratulations to Celeste and thank you for our new challenge, it looks like an interesting one.
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    My Precious Land

    In my garden,
    Arrived a man,
    Clad in black,
    Wielding a pan.

    He stole my rocks,
    That lined the ground,
    Which were so pretty,
    And spread all around.

    He pilfered my friends,
    my poor garden gnomes,
    Who I loved so much,
    And would be sold to new homes.

    I could find only pity,
    No anger or hate,
    For the man was desperate,
    And treated badly by fate.

    But then the man produced a shovel,
    And turned his eyes to my tree,
    Trying to dig it up,
    And ruin the memory of me.

    This I could not allow,
    He had crossed the line in the sand,
    I dragged him to hell,
    And my memorial would continue to stand.

    With two names instead of one,
    Remembered on my slab of precious land.
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    Nuremberg


    Can you see the children’s tears that fall,
    Stain the pavement with despair?
    Taste the hatred on that wrinkled scrawl,
    Of the ones that caged them there?

    Sir, the tears will drop no matter what,
    And the sadness spreads through fear.
    They will soon come to know the sound of the shot,
    And how they’re not a part of the cheer.

    Can you smell the evil in the air?
    Touch the static of shaking skin?
    Feel the heat from the fires of burning hair,
    Or catch the snowflakes of your kin?

    Sir, the clouds still roost in a midday sky,
    and the trees still breathe in the wind.
    But a smile in the sun’s perpetual eye,
    Is a pardon to those who have sinned.

    What do you see in your son’s face
    When you tell him it isn’t snow?
    Does he still hold you in a kiss, or soft embrace,
    When you claim that you ‘didn’t know’?

    The winds do indeed still breathe the trees,
    And the sun glares it’s judging rays.
    The gunshot you hear is stillness through pleas,
    And the fires grow hotter through days.

    Guilt is the child that grips your leg
    And begs you let his innocence free.
    Place the barrel, Commander, to the little one’s head,
    pray your ignorance doesn’t flee.

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    Shadow of St. Paul’s

    Saints and apostles watch
    over the city; look stonily from lifeless walls
    at the man sleeping in the doorway,
    who receives no pity from those
    who pass him by in the shadow
    of St. Paul’s.

    Dreams
    provide a slight escape for a homeless soul
    who had great ambitions
    but reality always lays in wait,
    snares him once more
    when he awakes
    to find rejection
    and derision served as breakfast
    on his plate
    of fragile china hope.

    Night people laugh –
    walk on by, oblivious
    to the derelict life
    as they look up at those saints
    positioned high on the cathedral walls.

    Big Ben is heard to call the hour
    and one dour face looks down
    upon the sleeper,
    wakes him and then moves him on.

    City mire draws
    the poor man deeper,
    to penetrate pores, irritate sores,
    while still he remains invisible
    to the passers by,
    as saints and apostles look on
    from way up high,
    to see no mercy shown,
    beneath the vaulted walls,
    towards the man who made his bed
    there in the shadow
    of St. Paul’s.

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    Justice


    A slight to one is a slight to many,
    and justice must be done.
    I direct myself with sweaty fear
    and blood on the tip of my tongue.


    And justice must be done;
    correct, set examples, protect; punish.
    And blood on the tip of my tongue
    drips onto every sentence.


    Correct, set examples, protect? Punish
    as desire and protocol. Revenge
    drips onto every sentence,
    with all-too-human wrath.


    As desire and protocol, revenge
    my compass is set before me,
    with all-too-human wrath
    belching into my sails.


    My compass is set before me;
    I direct myself with sweaty fear
    belching into my sails.
    A slight to one is a slight to many.
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    A Voice in My Head

    End the world’s poverty;
    make starvation history,
    see all those stars who give their time,
    so they no longer share the guilt -
    or have a part with those who still
    commit the crime.
    Another truth is what I see
    when I decide to glance at my t.v.
    and still find those starving faces
    staring back at me.

    We’ll never feed the world on Beverley Hills charity –
    or save a single soul by listening
    to Hollywood ministers preaching prosperity.
    Did I hear someone say, “Sell what you have,
    give to the poor and follow me”?
    I’m sure those words were not imaginary –
    in L.A. it’s so very hard to see.


    spiorad saor in aisce

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    USDA Aged

    Clipped coupon's crinkle with crisp sounds
    wrinkled hands, sort each stack
    she licks her leaded pencil
    tallies the total, of being old.

    Her mind drifts back to the time
    when life was Choice, and Prime;
    the man she loved, the child they made-
    though gone, still feeds her soul.

    She will join them soon...
    for now, she feeds her body
    with the choices she has left;
    Friskies or Fancy Feast?

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    Coddling the Warden

    Deeming me unfit,
    with a flush you offered
    my tiny gold shackle
    to the sewer rats
    years ago,
    but the digit still peels
    shedding flesh like tears.
    What an ingenious way
    to brand your prisoner.

    The barred windows
    have the inspector's greedy paw
    begging for grease again.
    I wonder if you'll remit
    or resort to brick
    denying me the sunlight,
    sullied by striped shadow,
    that assures me
    the world still exists.

    Your key violates the padlock
    and I jump to attention,
    waiting for inspection,
    ready to pipe up
    "Prisoner number one
    reporting for orders, sir!",
    as number two
    resumes her shrieking
    from the basement.

    Just a corner crack whore
    incarcerated without a rite;
    she's no hope of a gold shackle
    but still bound to wear your brand.
    Singing the chorus of Disco Inferno,
    you stoke the fire
    and then simply stare
    until the poker assumes the shades
    of an African sunset.

    "Bath then dinner!" you bark
    before descending the stairs.
    I lean upon the wall
    toeing an idle jack,
    making a note to dust it
    before it results in attack,
    when the screams
    of a million demons
    come barreling from below
    and a hint of singed skin
    seasons the breeze.

    Shocked into action
    I bustle to the bathroom
    to entreat the tap to exact
    the perfect temperature
    then hustle to the kitchen
    to guard the roast.
    Bloody rare is a must
    or it's another piercing
    by a needle dressed in rust.

    Silence abounds
    as prisoner two's pitiful pleas
    are thwarted by adhesive.
    (gotta love that Crazy Glue)
    I arrange your plates with a smug smile,
    almost slaphappy
    at the new inmate's induction.
    Perhaps she'll replace me
    as your prized plaything.

    I pull out your chair
    as you run twisted fingers
    through still damp hair.
    I place a napkin upon your lap
    and then curtsy with care
    so as not to bare scars.
    With bowed head, I giddily whisper,
    "So good of you to throw a party
    most wonderful Warden,
    it's a joy to have some company."
    and I spy a glint of gloat
    in the flint of your eyes.

    I offer you a bite
    with a silver fork
    so far beneath your grasp
    as a dirty little ditty
    bounces about my brain:
    Please spare her the boneyard
    beneath the basement floor,
    unlike the whores
    who came before,
    let this one be a keeper.
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    We wield power with solemn simony
    Glory and splendour
    Over the poor and pestilent,
    They who harbour horrifying heresies
    They are
    Carnal sons of Adam, rutting
    and wallowing with daughters of Eve
    They are
    Incorrigible, unrepentant, reprobates
    and feckless fun seeking fools.
    Who must pay!

    "Bleedin' criminal how they go on innit?"
    "Lesson learnt, don't get caught"
    "We was only havin' a laugh innit."
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    Apathy, Not Ignorance

    It is often said that evil prevails when good men fail to act.
    Every day, there is death, famine, oppression and war.
    This is not just in Egypt, North Korea, Afghanistan, or Iraq.
    It’s here in our local school, bank, or convenience store.
    I read about these things in newspapers, and yet I fail to react.
    Does this make me evil, or is there more I can ignore?
    Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.--E. L. Doctorow

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    To find the girl

    He waits, patiently.
    He waits until the sun sets.
    She sees him coming
    and run till she runs out of breath.

    Then she knows, it is her end.

    She wakes next morrow
    surprised that next day follows
    'I am still alive?'
    She asks not knowing to whom.

    He's contented. "She's mine."

    "Hello?" She calls in.
    nothing but echo replies.
    He does not reply.
    He is contented staring

    Tomorrow we meet my love.

    Finally they met.
    "What do you want" She asks him.
    "Be mine." He tells her.
    “I want to be home”

    “You are already home, love”

    He touches her arms.
    “Get your filthy hands off me!”
    “Patience.” He whispers.
    “I will die first!” she replies.

    His patience is running out.

    The next headline says.
    "MISSING WOMAN WAS FOUND DEAD"
    was strangled to death
    and raped after her last breath.

    Now he patiently lurks in the dark, to find his next girl.
    A small mistake is significant enough to change the dynamic of everything that follows...

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    From Sandman


    I like to do it
    at night, for starters,
    when darkness touches things
    as the moon hangs slippery above.

    I’m not picky though –
    I like maidens, and children, and men.
    Variety, you see, like when hard posts
    feel soft pillows.

    But really, the trick is
    to make it feel good
    while I steal. You won’t say no –
    in fact you’ll ask for more –

    because I take you places
    you couldn’t go alone.
    You’ll pulse along with me
    while I steal all you thought was real.
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    As evening neared, I found myself
    Near Story Street, and close to home;
    The dimness of the lamps now veiled
    Most sights that day would show.

    The air still held a winter's chill,
    Though spring was close at hand,
    And I had just come out from having
    A cozy meal, well planned.



    Just up ahead, still bustling,
    And long a favorite stop of mine -
    Cook's bakery, with luscious treats
    And shoppers milling round.

    I stopped to savor tempting scents
    That wafted down the way
    When all at once, time seemed to slow -

    A trespass would unfold.



    A little way across the street
    With hungry eyes and naught to eat
    Were huddled children, all entranced
    By the cheery window scene.



    One tiny waif would face his fright -
    With shaking limbs, he moved apart
    And stepped into the slowing street,
    Hard focused on a tart.

    I wondered then how long between
    Each meal they had to wait;
    Visions of these lovely lures
    Would taunt even one who just ate!


    Against the window, lightly pressed
    His nose now rested on the pane;
    What does he want? I asked myself,
    And felt my coat for change.

    But ere I moved too close, I saw
    The desperation in his eyes,
    Hunger is excruciate -
    And thought gave way to deed.

    For me, time stopped, but as I watched,
    He scurried through the door
    And snatched up what would seem to him
    A gracious meal, and more!

    He must have felt such great distress -
    As a skinless form exposed
    For just a moment - then he rushed
    Back outside, to the cold.

    He did not look, but lurched across
    The street, this child without a name;
    Midst ragged breath, I saw him eat
    His treasure with no shame.

    Still I stood where I had stopped,
    Not feeling now the cold or dark;
    Revisiting what I had seen,
    Examining my heart.


    Fools we are, in mortal coils,
    As life plays out each part;
    The crime is not the action, see,
    But human disregard.

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    Guilty...NO!

    My heart pounds fast, eratic and uncontrolled
    yet my mind is calm and thinking bold

    I am poor, living like a dog on the streets so cold
    shall I give in to my conditions
    Let the hopelesness of my situation cast assunder any fleeting glance of optomism
    No!

    I will take my destiny in my own hands
    I will expropriate the rich man who passes the street where I slumber and beg
    This man of greed, fine cloth on his back and paper in his pocket
    Has such a man ever given me a second of his thoughts or a dime of his money
    No!

    They will call me a thief, a robber and a scoundrel
    They shall damn me to hell
    Society and all those of property do this already, so what will a few more words do
    Better to be a scoundrel with bread than a saint without
    If I take this rich mans ill gotten gold, which he made off an honest mans brow am I guilty
    No!
    Violence is the only way to answer violence.
    ~Gudrun Ensslin

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    Transcending Apathy

    Beyond shade trees
    the old house peels
    like sun hurt skin;
    but love stares
    from windows
    as walls slant
    and separate
    to release caught laughter.

    He creaks in his tatters;
    dreams inside his cardboard tunnels
    where past is vibrant,
    and reality is shades of gray.
    This old abandoned mansion smiles
    into his bleeding feet.

    Remember, remember
    perfumes, piano tunes,
    and Mary who loved me;
    remember
    a child’s voice,
    a pink room
    like a womb.
    Last edited by apple; 02-15-2011 at 01:15 AM.
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