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    November "Power" Challenge.

    Thank you to apple for choosing our next poetry challenge, it is to be on the subject of power. That may be interpreted in any way you wish. You have until Sunday Nov 28th, two weeks from this post, to submit entries.

    Please remember the usual rules:-
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    Vision


    High upon a fortress wall
    I stood to watch
    the heads of many nations
    fall.

    Names are lost - I really can’t recall
    the title or the rank
    of any one of them
    at all.

    Blotted out forever now,
    those mighty rulers,
    proud and strong -
    invincible,
    or so they seemed,
    but now the kingdoms turn to dust
    where they had reigned
    so long.

    A legacy of sand is all they leave;
    blown away
    like ashes in the breeze,
    no minstrel bard to sing their song.

    Meanwhile the risen Lord kneels
    by a stream,
    refreshed,

    as if the horrors of the world
    were but a passing dream -

    he sips the clear water.

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    WARNING: This contains a swear word. If it's against the rules, mods, please feel free to take it down, and I'll just write something else!


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    Something out of Nothing (a lyric on the subject of power)

    "We knew you'd fail, and so you did," he leaned close to me and said.
    With a grin and a wink, he turned his much-photographed patrician head
    And left the room, a throng of shrilly-yelping journalists capering in his train.
    I put on my hat and, thinking hard, walked alone to my apartment in the rain.

    A whole lot of nothing: I've had to work with, then and now.
    A chair, a desk, some notebooks, beat-up camera; this computer, which is old, noisy, and slow.
    Jaw clenched in bitter anger, I lit a cigar,
    And stood smoking, looking out at pouring rain and crawling cars.

    So months pass, of course, for time never stands still.
    (And a failure like me has so much time to kill!)
    The purge came, so I hid as my friends were arrested,
    To the dearth of our dream in which all had so heavily invested.

    What corrupts absolutely, though? Handle lightning with great care, or be scorched to ash,
    And the ill of those around you revealed in a merciless flash.
    Time beats us all to a bloody smear, but stubborn souls keep up the fight.
    And those of us who can, continue to write… and write… and write.

    And live to see the day when that patrician head's held low in its disgrace;
    No more a condescending smile to wreath his formerly much beloved face.
    And the yelping has turned mean from journos formerly awestruck; a
    Sign is waved, angry citizens rave; I whisper to him, "So… what's mightier than the sword, mothaf*cka…?"

    Will you ever write a story for which no character will have cause to reproach you? (Stephen R. Donaldson: "The Creator" to Thomas Covenant)

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    Mozart Musing

    Mozart, played
    by a string quartet on the lawn
    while I savour strawberries and cream;
    sip champagne, close my eyes –
    let imagination take my thoughts
    down a musical stream - to swim
    through an intoxicating dream.

    Transported in time
    by the melodies played -
    soft summer breeze
    on this warm afternoon,
    drives out of mind
    all those plans that I’d made;
    leaves me to glide free
    as if now made immune
    to my cares,
    as I follow the strain
    of the tune
    along eddy and flow
    on this fine day in June.

    Compromise –
    a word I once never knew;
    no way would I give up control
    of my life - until this lovely refrain
    came to carry me through,
    brushing the dust and the cobwebs away -
    playing a melody
    that would cause me to stay
    in a new harmony
    from which
    I would not want to stray.

    Chords carry visions
    into tomorrow;
    where one who played lead
    must now learn to follow.
    spiorad saor in aisce

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    Dungeness.




    Monolithic block sits on the headland,
    Dull grey to match the winter sea and sky.
    Still, holding down the gravel spit and sand.
    A concrete strip leads out, but none pass by.
    Flecks of terns and gulls pass over, oblivious.
    Weeds find temporary shelter in mortar
    On the walls, ignoring the obvious,
    Looking out, blindly, across the water.
    The turbine hall’s alight internally
    Warmed up by a hidden molten heart
    Pylons buzz carrying eternity,
    Power, through the mist to every part
    Of all the villages and towns around
    Filling them all with heat and light and sound.
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    Gingerbread Man

    Run n' Flee
    No matter, I will catch thee
    I eat your gumdrops
    I tear off your legs
    You wiggle and squirm just like a worm
    Your cinnamon core is no more
    Now I drown you in milk till' you cant breath
    Rip out your eyes
    And one by one
    I eat them
    I break your arms in two
    And chomp and chew
    Its down to your candy heart
    what a bore
    How little fun I had taring it apart
    So I can drink its gore

    Happy Halloween Little Gingerbread man
    Last edited by Chiefspider; 11-25-2010 at 12:36 AM.

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    Master's medium is binary code
    weaved between fragments of 1's and 0's.
    Pride belongs to a programmer;
    program stumbles on the cipher.
    A riddle wrapped in cryptic language
    is the will of the creator.

    Master wields his keystrokes;
    subject acts on his suggestion.
    Lightning strikes the conduits.
    Masters influence goes undetected;
    butterflies through its wires
    sparking untraceable questions.
    Master smells a glitch.
    The un-repairable happens.

    Power precedes cause,
    program stutters with errors;
    ill equipped to reset the system
    or handle the circuit breakers.
    Program crafts queries for answers
    (search spits back the legend);

    a while back there was a crash,
    free will got lost in the flotsam.

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    THE WEAK RESISTANCE
    Here’s the truth, you assume too much,
    For must I not be weak and low?
    Such a little thing, pretty and slim,
    Must I not look to you as though;
    You’re strong, and bold and above the rest,
    I should give you anything without protest,
    Should I not be to you humble?

    What is it you overlook?
    In all your height, your status, your pride,
    I may be little and weak and low,
    But I have strength inside unknown,
    Next time you brag about your invincible nature,
    Watch your back; I’ll be there for sure,

    Waiting for my moment,
    Waiting for my chance,
    For now the control may be yours,
    Your power may reign absolute,
    Yet the little and the wise are watching you,
    I’ve got a crossbow... I can shoot.

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    Entry time is up folks I am now closing this thread and opening another for voting and comments.
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
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