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  • Tom; Irritated Snowman

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  • Tarantula; Samsung Predators

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  • Gagoots; Little deaths

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  • C.Gholy; Loathed on the Road

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Thread: New challenge, RTA

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    New challenge, RTA

    As I was the only person to enter the challenge for "baseball" I figured that I win that section and decided to do something I have been considering for some time, namely split the challenge into two parts so one is being written and one voted on at all times and you don't have to wait a month for your next chance to enter if you don't fancy the subject.
    My choice for the subject is A Road Traffic Accident, I figure that there are so many of them that almost everyone has some experience of one, and they are certainly traumatic enough to inspire some sort of outpouring.
    As this thread will cover the voting thread for the love poems I would remind you to vote for your favourite there as well.
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    Road Trip

    The soft insouciance of heading home at night
    Broken by blue flashing light
    Beside the hairpin road.
    Troopers guarding the trees with care
    Warning motorists beware.
    Dead along the red cycle sprawls the suit's remains
    Another lies in the leaves, quiet and tame.
    Spotlights' glare torch the dark
    Reveal the cycle still upright,
    The trees hold it tight.

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    Irritated Snowman

    Homebound with the snow
    and the ice as it bites
    into my tyres
    just like my damn boss bites
    into my neck.

    Little needles of white
    hit the front window
    like the irritated voices
    of my colleagues
    hit me.

    Pressing down on the pedal
    I think of the warmth
    of my home
    instead of the coldness
    of my bitter representatives.

    And then I stop.

    Ever so suddenly
    I hit the brakes as
    I glimpse the cornered off section
    of this glum road.

    Taking a closer look
    I realise I am right,
    as a blonde-haired woman
    is halfway through her window
    and drenched in white tinted blood.

    She resides opposite my desk.

    And without warning
    I am placed opposite her again
    as I hear the screeching
    of gritless tyres
    and watch the bright lights
    grow ever bigger.

    My seatbelt snaps with me.

    And as I lie
    in the middle of the frosted road
    stained in my own blood
    and embraced by shards of glass
    I wince,
    just like I winced when I realised
    I had to come into work that day.
    Struggling is what leads to success.
    There is no point growing without a story.

    Engraved on the wall of a crowded, concrete room in Sierra Leone.

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    When does this close? Working on an idea now.

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    Samsung Predators
    I'm late for work,
    why won't these assholes proceed?
    I reach under my seat,
    snotty toilet paper wad,
    no,
    tatty Stephen King novel,
    no,
    remains of a Whopper; America's favorite burger,
    no,
    There it is,
    Ibuprofen 800mg,
    I swallow it dry,
    What the fuck are these people looking at
    that is so important,
    and Why was Gherke wrong
    today of all days?
    I step on the gas and jerk to a stop,
    I step on the gas and jerk to a stop,
    Lights blue and red circle
    like vultures
    and the spectators will pick the bones clean
    with Samsung flashes
    I rub the bridge of my nose and sigh
    wishing I hadn't quite smoking
    We will never move
    A virtue maker took every last dime with that scam
    It was worth it just to learn some slight of hand.

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    Little Deaths

    Fingers sweep over cool twisted metal,
    our blood flows, engorging.
    Follow the contours, excitment builds
    as the lines become senseless.
    Let's slip into this crumpled chaos...

    ...and pretend.

    Inside we can still feel the impact,
    as we grind and thrash with quickened breath.
    The violent end of life surrounds us,
    and brings us to our little deaths.

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    Loathed On The Road

    Cracks of the glass lay there,
    Bathing in a newborn river
    From a red waterfall.

    Leaks from the flesh stained
    The beauty of the car.
    The victim wished for help
    Until his soul faded away.

    Time and Fate decided to be cruel,
    And eat his life before he could heal.
    All that was left...
    Was a drooling corpse
    And a scared family.

    This is the reason
    Why beer addicts are loathed
    On the Road.
    Last edited by C.Gholy; 02-13-2009 at 08:08 PM.
    "I am temperamental and I have imperfections and I am emotional I am unpredictable I am naked I am vulnerable I am a woman I am opening up to you"- Christina Aguilera

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    is this just poems?
    至 高 神 的 孩 子
    Yī zhìgāo shén de háizi


    Nails did not keep our Savior on the cross, love did.
    Can I get an amen...

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    It's just poems at the moment, when the competition closes there is the opportunity to vote for your favourite and comment on the poems. We are now voting on the previous poems (A love poem without using the word "love") in the thread "Vote for Love". Unfortunately so far there have been no comments and only one person has voted, the poets have not even voted for their own work! Luckily there were only two entries so I was able to install a poll and won't have the tedium of adding the vote up.
    Don't know what the problem was that time round, was it something I did?
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    Mentor Olly Buckle's Avatar
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    We have another vote in the "love" thread (That's 2 now folks). Irony is that one of the contestants voted for the other, this evens up the scores and gives us a tie situation, so hurry over to Love and vote now.
    P.S. 38 people have visited the thread without commenting or voting??? They can't all be Google bots surely?
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
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    Confessions of a Modern Sociopath

    CONFESSIONS OF A MODERN SOCIOPATH

    "I'm so beautiful," she thinks to herself
    as she gazes amorously in the mirror
    and touches up her light pink lipgloss.
    People wave as they pass by her window.

    "I'm so rhythmic," she muses to herself
    as her manicured fingers dance and drum
    to the swing of some same-old pop song.
    People cup their hands and call out in vain.
    They wave as they pass by her window.

    "I'm so popular," she affirms to herself
    as she laughs and babbles into her cell phone.
    He said that she said that real conversations
    are nobody's business. People reach out for her.

    "I'm so lucky," she declares to herself
    as she watches a small body roll to a heavy halt
    beneath the red light receding in her rear view.
    People surge forward and clamor to the skies.
    Staggered, is this now stock-still city intersection.

    "I'm so blessed", she confesses, "to be
    number one."

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    This thread is now closed to new poems (a little late, I apologise). If you would like to add comments to the poems as well as voting please feel free.
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
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