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    This Is Time

    Note: this is intended to be spoken aloud, so that time may pass as it is being read:

    This is time.
    And so is this.
    This is time aswell.
    And this is more time.
    This is time too.
    And that's what time is.

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    lol ! (feel like I've been pick-pocketed)

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    Witty, sneaky, and yet poignant The last line brings everything together, brilliantly and concisely - very good.
    One note, I believe it is 'as well' and not 'aswell'

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    Quote Originally Posted by Willow View Post
    Witty, sneaky, and yet poignant The last line brings everything together, brilliantly and concisely - very good.
    One note, I believe it is 'as well' and not 'aswell'
    Thanks a lot, that's a very flattering comment. That's odd, I've seen a few people spell it that way so I've always thought it was acceptable, although I typed it that way in word in American English and British English and it flagged both as incorrect. Maybe it's a regional thing.

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    Very clever, I agree with Kevin's comment, I feel as if I've been hoodwinked.

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    Loving my status as a poetry con artist.

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    A true artiste, Mike! Con artist is so... pedestrian.

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    As a unrepentant clock watcher, I got a tremendous kick out of this, you clever gentleman. I'm always counting seconds wasted that I can't get back, you just made me realize it's a foolish practice. Great little piece, Mike.

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