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    Pogonophobia

    I learned a new poetry form this morning: the double dactyl.

    Lines 1,2,3,5,6 and 7 are made of two dactyls (BAH-bah-bah). Lines 4 and 8 have one dactyl followed by a single syllable, and they rhyme. Line 1 is two nonsensical rhyming dactyls, Line 2 is a person's name, and one of the lines in the second stanza has to be a single word.

    Here's my first attempt:

    Pogonophobia
    Fuzzily Wuzzily
    Benjamin Gib-a-ney
    Grew him a beard which was
    Coming in fine.


    Then he found out he had
    Pogonophobia.
    He can shave his, but he'd
    Best not touch mine.

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    verily verily
    fun hee hee

    ...enjoyed, thx obi_have

    Ian
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    a magnificent explosion of dazzling light.
    Stunning! Defiant!
    ...daybreak, and life is simply awesome.

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    Enjoyed it.
    I still have to get the hang of meter.
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