Thread: Some School Essays

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Here are some of the essays I've written for my 9th grade English class over the past year. I got good grades, but I'm just not totally happy with my writing style. Any suggestions for me?

Aside from the part where you don't have anything posted except descriptions?

Originally Posted by Shawn

Aside from the part where you don't have anything posted except descriptions?

That's fixed, my files didn't upload correctly the first time.

I just realized my error in the marc antony paper, so please disregard that.

I humbly asked to speak for his funeral, and a friend,
should be
I humbly asked to speak at his funeral, as a friend,

You could have talked about the Line Item Veto in Transparency and Accountability in Congressional Spending.