Some School Essays - Writers Forum

Hargrimm · 06-08-2007, 11:45 PM

http://ea.scholar.googlepages.com/lit

Here are some of the essays I've written for my 9th grade English class over the past year. I got good grades, but I'm just not totally happy with my writing style. Any suggestions for me?

Shawn · 06-08-2007, 11:54 PM

Aside from the part where you don't have anything posted except descriptions?

Hargrimm · 06-09-2007, 12:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Shawn

Aside from the part where you don't have anything posted except descriptions?

That's fixed, my files didn't upload correctly the first time.

Hargrimm · 06-09-2007, 12:10 AM

I just realized my error in the marc antony paper, so please disregard that.

I humbly asked to speak for his funeral, and a friend,
should be
I humbly asked to speak at his funeral, as a friend,

dwspig2 · 06-09-2007, 07:12 AM

You could have talked about the Line Item Veto in Transparency and Accountability in Congressional Spending.