Thread: Beauty, Longing, Sexuality, Shame, Devotion

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Jesus Christ, I was completely entranced by your use of language, description and the way you told this story. Not once did I ever lose interest, I hung on to every God Damn word.

This a is a really good, with every word you use, it turns everything to gold, you can write pages and pages and I wouldn't get bored. To sum it up, it's flawless and I loved it. Congratulations, I take my hat off!

10/10

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Joseph

I liked this too. Usually with pieces like this I can't reach the end because they become excessively sentimental or are just badly written. But I got through this one okay. I could relate to it in places as well, and for me that is the mark of a worthy piece of writing.

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