Thread: Life

I am a new member, and I am not sure where to post my article so I am posting it on here. I would like to get some feedback on my writing, and would like here some opinons thanks:

Life has its own unique design that its walls are constructed by universal truths or universal behaviors/patterns. And the constructions of these walls are supported by a universal force(s). Many know that in a free existence there is chaos. As it has been said, “without rules there is chaos.” The walls are the rules of Life that makes Life existence possible. Without these walls there would be no existence. Destruction and chaos would be prevalent until Life no longer exists.

However, it is only when these walls have been breached, Life becomes inharmonious. The walls are breached when an element has acted against Life, or Life’s design. Life has a natural motion as in the human body has a natural motion. It’s motion is predictable not only by its unique design but by the gravitational force. Life has its unique design as is guided by universal forces.

When the natural motion of the human body is disturbed the body experiences injury an imbalance to its equilibrium. Hence, when an element moves in an illegitimate motion, Life experiences its injuries and fall into an imbalance. When these imbalances occur, building of frustration begins, problems arise and develop, until the complete construction of chaos.

Many disciples of knowledge have learned the natural movement of the human body. Universalics seeks the knowledge of what are the universal truths, behaviors/patterns for one to learn and apply, and follow the natural movement of Life. The main idea is be consistent with Life. If an element travels on a path in the direction of the force, then natural motion is disturb and the cycle to chaos (if continued) will begin.


As in if one is running against the wind. Struggles and difficulties come about, that frustrates or produces tension upon the muscles. As time passes, problems arise that depletes energy more rapidly and fatigues the muscles. Shortly after, a chaotic event occurs when the muscles have been over worked and the body arrives to exhaustion.

However, one who lives by the natural movement of Life is traveling with the wind. The wind can be used as a guide, and as an advantage through the many hardships one faces upon the path one chooses to walk upon.

The idea is to remain consistent with Life’s motion. If this motion is disturbed, Life becomes inharmonious to the path of chaos.

Not my specialist area this, but even if it was I'm not sure I'd quite follow you.. I think you need to establish more about these 'walls' as it seems pretty fundamental to your argument..

It might be worth qualifying some of the statements; 'As it has been said' and 'many disciples' doesn't lend much credence to your arguments.

Also, isn't the 'construction of chaos' a hell of an oxymoron? Might want to re-think the wording there.

The punctuation and sentence structure needs a little attention, and I think it would help make the point a little clearer as well. Sometimes it reads just as a list of points instead of a logical progression of argument.

Intriguing stuff though, even if I may not totally agree with the science (from my perspective as a layperson) ..