Thread: U Couldn't Have a Healthy Relationship if You Tried (Offensive Language)

I resent the fact I ever meet you
I rebuke God for putting someone like you in my life
Someone who has caused me pain and agony for over 2.5 years
Someone who lied to me so much I didn't know a lie from the truth

But I figured it out
You are a selfish self-centered brat
Because of you I never want to know love
Because of you I see females would rather hurt me than love me
Because of you I wish I was dead
Because you never stop God damned fucking with my head

I hope you go to hell
Where you can suffer in vain like I have
Believing in promises that were spoken untruthfully
Hanging on because you believe
Being told it was all in your head, like you told me
Honey, if you believe that then you are the one who is delusional

Maybe it is me who should feel sorry for you
Maybe it is you who is more screwed up than me

People make mistakes you know
But love is supposed to mean you don't crucify them for every little mistake
I wish my Crucifixion was over already
I would rather be dead
Than hung up here on this cross for you to give another lashing to

Yeah I'm sorry it had to come to this too
But it didn't have to end this way
It's only because you wouldn't see me another way

Hell, for all I know you go the other way, lesbian
Or you buy escorts to show you a good time you don't know how to have with someone real
Someone like me
But that is your loss
Because of your hard headedness
Because you're a selfish brat
You're lower than a damn rat

Hello

I thought of the old story about 'sour grapes', when the fox couldn't get what he wanted and so, with an over-the-shoulder flippant sneer, he decided that those grapes would sour his delicate taste anyway.

it reminded me of all the back-talk i used to hear in school whenever someone broke up...this later turned into accounts of homelife breakage.

Still, if I was to say something about the writing, it would be that this could be impacted better, Just lil touches here and there to nail this hatred home. it's almost there but I think just a bit of refining would make this stand out more.

thanks for the read.

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