At the age of eighteen months I pooed in the bathtub.
Anything to get that post of Intel’s off my monitor. Every time I saw the words “Parisian nights” I had an image of something erotic, and it wasn’t at all.
At the age of eighteen months I pooed in the bathtub.
Anything to get that post of Intel’s off my monitor. Every time I saw the words “Parisian nights” I had an image of something erotic, and it wasn’t at all.
And this is a better vision for you???
Okay, you've given us the Where, the Who, and the Poo.
The imagery is quite clear... maybe flesh out the character a little more.
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