Thread: Asking for a Crit on my Graphic Novel's Narrative.

Posting the Graphic Novel on DA has been on of the most satisfying projects I did in my life. Although now that I'm readying the GN for submission, I find myself having the pre-submission jitters. And I just couldn't let go of the manuscript, let alone decide a publisher I'll submit it into.

If you have the time to read 30 pages of the Graphic Novel's first issue you can read it here. Since I'm trying to apply the story telling of a novel to it. I'd like to ask what you think about the narrative, the voice, the characters' characterization and and any thoughts that comes to your mind.

And feel free to be harsh. lol.

Thank you and have a good day.

Graphic novels are not something I've really been into. I'm quite impressed with the way that you've presented this. The artwork is excellent.

Thank you. although what do you think about the Narrative? Writing is still my first love. So I don't really enjoy illustrating if I don't write it.