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Thread: Urgent help please!

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    Sweetdevotion
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    Urgent help please!

    I didn't think I would make it but I'm up to 41,000 words, and now...I'm stuck.
    I have two endings and i don't know which one to choose, so I'd really appreciate some insight:

    Ending A) Main character turns into a full vampire and helps end with the bad guys. After wards, discovers the spell to make them all day-walkers and thus they all live happily ever after in Goronwir.

    Ending B) War erupts and Main character is unable to turn into a vampire. To make it worst she gets into a trap and is thrown back to where she originally came from: Earth.
    Some time later, her "lover boy" XD, finds her, converts her and they live happily ever after as vampires on Earth.
    Thanks for the help

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    I'd go with option B. It has more conflict and has the "all is lost" feel to it until the very end. Those kind of endings are what people read for. Option A just seemed kinda weak somehow. Go with option B.

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    B. Nothing else i can say which isn't already expressed by celestialwolf.
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    Sweetdevotion
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    Thanks both of you
    I did choose option B in the end

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    Yes, I think B. More interesting than the standard "I'm a vampire. I defeat you. We all live happily ever after" plot ending.

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    Olivia

    Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. ~ Anton Chekhov



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    Ending B without the "happily ever after" cliché.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PSFoster View Post
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