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    Gumby replied to a thread Beard Challenge... in The Writers' Lounge
    I bravely quit coloring my hair five years ago. Found out that I am, apparently, Cruella De Vil's sister. :) I can live with that, but if I start...
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    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Bobcat's Yowl: in Poetry
    Very nice. The economization helps.
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    garza replied to a thread Animosity Towards Publishers and Editors? in Writing Discussion
    Not edited at all? And you expect people to read it? Most self-published writers do as good a job of editing as they can. Others hire an editor....
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    Yesterday, 05:55 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Bobcat's Yowl: in Poetry
    Yes, but even doing that the stanza is really unnecessary and not as interesting as the rest of the piece. Is it absolutely necessary that we know...
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    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Where The River Takes Me in Poetry
    Some thoughts:
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    Yesterday, 05:47 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread The cord is tied in Poetry
    I agree with B's critique. My other issue is "land out". 'Out' does not seem to be the right word there. It's awkward phrasing and rhythmically...
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    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Graduation Eve in Poetry
    Thanks for the kind words, Lisa. Here is my edit: Graduation Eve Children litter the darkness, scamper around campus, smash cardboard...
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    Yesterday, 05:39 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Comfort Zone in Poetry
    As of now, this piece is filled with too many cliches - cold as ice, burn like fire, spin like a top, etc. I suggest finding new, original ways to...
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    Yesterday, 05:37 PM
    Squalid Glass replied to a thread Bobcat's Yowl: in Poetry
    I think you should cut the first stanza. It's unnecessary because the title sets up the image.
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    Gumby replied to a thread The Mind of God in Prose Poetry
    I enjoyed the picture you painted here, Jim. Very interesting thought process. :) I have a suggestion for the 'ofs', if you choose to change that...
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    The idea here is a humorous one and I like the story you've presented. I found this line to be adorable: Very unexpected, which is always a...
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    Dreamworx95 created a blog entry The cat's name is Tofu! in Dreamworx95
    I think math is going to take a serious hit at my GPA. Nevermind that I've shown up for almost every class and I've done all of the homework on...
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    05-23-2012, 06:04 PM
    garza replied to a thread Animosity Towards Publishers and Editors? in Writing Discussion
    Those royalties may be lower than you would like, but they are dependable and can continue quite a while, if the product is good. Once the publisher...
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